Luna wants to play hide-and seek with Celestia, and when Celestia agrees, the little princess decides to hide in the best spot imaginable: the shoe closet. Who knew a shoe closet could be this fun?
After the game, Luna learns an important lesson of hide-and-seek.
Luna is a filly in this story, and this is told from her point of view.
This was adorable. I couldn't get a smile off my face.
5/5 mustaches!
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>>Random Pony
Thanks! *Takes mustaches*
Very cute. This made my day!
>>The Delirium
Im very glad you liked it!
..Ham and Cheese.
What.
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CARNIVOROUS WOONA.
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I guess it had to do something with me eating a ham and cheese sandwich while writing this story.
5196719 Change it to lettuce and cheese or something..or hay and cheese..
SOMETHING OTHER THAN HAM.
5196733 Done. Thank you for the suggestion.
very cute! I just wanted to hug the woona!
5196834 Everyone wants to hug a woona playing hide-and-seek!
5196852 A very good point!
5197145 Maybe! Im trying to think of another adventure, maybe something about cookies.
Adorableness overload DANGER DANGER !!
That. Was. SOOO. Freaking. CCCUUUUTTTEEEE!
Would love to see more. And I think Woona demands it!
5202659 I did make another Luna and Tia adventure, Just as cute as this one!
Oh, and thanks for the positive feedback!
D'awww very cute.
5204837 Thank you for reading!
D'aww
Not ewen da Fancy Awt Thingy of Words can descwibe dis cutenesh. Sewioswy widicuwouswy stupidwy dumbwy wetawdedwy cute and dawww inspiwing.
A very important lesson that everyone should remember now and then. Thanks for reminding me of that lesson! The story was great!
So. Freaking. Cute.
Huh, apparently cuteness overload is a real thing, because my heart is melting from all the d'awwww right now.
Aside from this being insanely adorable, I noticed something that I'm wondering if it was an indirect reference to Ephesians 6:10-18:
Reason I'm asking is that it's written with similar language.
Also, I'm your seventieth upvote. Kudos.
5540031 I never noticed. I just wrote the story without looking anything up.
Also, thank for the upvote!
It's always nice reading stuff about Woona and Tia. Not only did I love reading about Woona and her mini-adventures in Tia's shoe closet, but I loved how the story began and ended with Woona and Tia eating cheese sandwiches and hay fries and Woona asking her older sister if she can play a game.
Very cute and adorable story. I had a huge smile on my face while reading the story.
"Tia? Can we please play a game?"
And thus, the Luna cycle of fun starts once more!
*You're
This story is adorable. Other than this typo, it's solid. Nice job!
One word: Diabeetus