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Sand Storm
I am a big Spike fan, so most of my fanfics will have Spike and/or CMC as the main hero's. If you have come here for some logic than this is the wrong place...maybe
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After just reading the long description, you badly need an editor. I am cringing. And I think you might mean "Darling" in the title? I'm gonna pass on reading this- but you'll get no thumbs down from me! :)
Two complete thoughts, either put a conjunction in between the two parts, or seperate them with a period.
Alone needs a comma after it.
Change close to closes.
Put a comma on but.
Change came to comes.
Curtien should be curtain.
Put a period after this, because the next sentence is a complete thought.
Put comma after she.
Dependent clauses should end with a comma.
You already said Sweetie was away in the beginning of this desc.
These sentences are poorly worded.
I bet "Mirrors" is a self insert OC for wish fulfillment.
This story is garbage. Get an editor.
5473965 Thanks for the word help.
This was a awesome part it in was sweet and spicy.