Fluttershy has always seemed to have had a terrible fear of dragons, but nopony has ever bothered to ask why exactly. So when a red dragon named Titan turns up in Ponyville, saying he's an old friend and looking to 'make amends' with the yellow pegasus, everypony, including Fluttershy's closest friends are shocked to say the least. Soon the questions on everyponys' lips are what broke their friendship in the first place, could it have something to do with Fluttershy's apparent fear of dragons, and can they both put the past behind them.
Inspiration: Sonic Syndicate (Band) - Red Eyed Friend (2008)
Chapters (9)
Hmm. Too early to make a judgement, but it's looking good so far mate. Favourited to see where it goes...
A few grammatical errors, but nothing too big.
this has Potential
Aside from the minor mistakes even the best of us would over look as we are not perfect, I really think that this will be one of the many successful stories that I have viewed on here. I am interested to see where this goes and it would be great for this story to be finished within an allotted time. Why do I say that? Because on certain topics or stories, you want to make a great debut with it, and clearly this story is probably the one that will really get attention compared to your other stories.
To simplify, the story is great so far, you need to finish it sooner than you hoped, and watch for small errors. Good luck my dear Brony. Adieu~
Fantastic start. As what the few above me said, there are quite a few grammar errors in most of the paragraphs, otherwise it's still eligible. I'll be waiting diligently for the next chapter.
i like were this is going
Thanks everyone...I think i've fixed up most of the grammar errors
Just be aware also that I'm doing a double major so time isn't something i have a lot of...but I'll try and get around to the next few chapters ASAP (I'll try to aim at a minimum of one a week)
Other then that thanks for your inputs...feedback is always welcome
Freelancer
decent. Looking forward to further updates. only problems are grammar (your where you should have you're, for example).
I guess I should also admit I wrote chapter one in a period of two hours on fims writing tool in the middle of the night...from now on I'll be working in word during uni breaks so that should help clean up any grammar issues and let me get updates out faster
Still has the same amount of potential it had since the previous chapter. I look forward to the next update. Good luck my dear Brony/Pegasister.
Adieu~
Well, I'm relieved there isn't any Dragon pony shipping. Can you imagine a full size dragon and a pony doing it? It'd be like trying to shove a hotdog into a Cheerio. For that imagery, you are welcome.
Rarity fainted? I was expecting that :P
what no dragon shping shit D:
492769 more like just cuddling or crushing
i like were this is going still and cant wait fo thane to come back i like him the most!
Yes.
Fluttershy you ASSHAT!
ironic how the only emoticon I have to express my feelings on this is a Fluttershy, who I am now furious with.
Also, First.
Damn
Fluttershy was PISSED XD
Another great chapter! Cant wait for the next!
she better have something to be pissed about OR SHE IS REALLY A ASSHAT
492769 It would almost be like the "Hot Skitty on Wailord Action" meme
Poor Titan...
i wish mine was as good
Ok i definitely liked this new version of the 'event'. This confrontation with his brother seems much more dramatic and plausible than the cliche "I never want to see you again, I never liked you blah blah blah". So essentially the only, unvoiced because it wasn't that important , complaint I had before is now gone.
Now on to chapter 5.
next week...chapter 7? don't forget 6
Oh lordy, someone's gonna' get it!
It has potential, but I really think you need to restructure your sentences. There seems to be a lot of run on sentences, sentences that could be broken down into more manageable sentences, and even some sentences that could benefit from moving around a few commas. I will bear with it for a while, but I do think you need a pre-reader or at least this: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xemG7BLk2rvAmQCREIaj5wX2ubvmVt7WziEvh7xXV9g/edit#
Here's hoping you improve. You have potential, and potential should never be wasted.
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my bad...chapter 6
I think Thane is gonna get beat up by Tita
n. Big time.
RD screwed up big time, I think. Thane screwed up big time, maybe. Titan is done screwing around, most definitely
Thane, why you be acting creepy bro. Nuzzling mares in their sleep....
I can see it now, Pinkie throws a 'Welcome To Ponyville Dragon Party'
OH GODDESS WHY MUST I HAVE SUCH A VISUAL AND VIVID IMAGINATION?!?! I keep seeing dash x thane running thru my head
WHYYY?!?!?!
Wrong emote; should have been
I like this chapter. I like Dashie. I like dragons, but not as much as Dashie. I no longer have the urge to blow Thanes brains out at point-blank range with a nuke. Actually, I find myself agreeing with him to an extent, she is adorable but he might've been going a bit far with the nuzzling depending on what was running though his mind at the time.
Good work mate! I can't think of anything else to compliment this story!
I would think they are only friends.... cause how would any relationship more than that work out?
Outcome of everyone vs Storm interesting. Everyone we know of's gonna fight against him, but we don't know if he's bringing any backup or not, plus the fact that the dragons seem considerably nervous around him and, well, they're dragons.
How big is Storm anyway? May be a huge factor.
Enough of my rambling. I admit I had some doubts at the beginning of the story, glad to see they were 100% wrong. Good work mate.
"I broke two of my talons in a drunken argument with a tree because of it"...pffft-bahahahahaha
oh that was funny. Really liking where this is going. Also darn...I was kind of liking the awkward Thane/Dash thing. 
Drunk dragon vs. tree, tree wins
8 dragons vs. storm and how many dragons, must play the waiting game to find out... CURSE YOU WAITING GAME!!!!
... *Points at Thane* THAT. DRAGON. IS. FREAKING. AWESOME.
Dragon Fight:
It's like a catfight, but the cats in question are 80 stories tall and equipped with fire, fangs, claws and wings.
Also, this was a totally lopsided battle: Titan had the magic of friendship on his side!
Good chapter one question why did they not just call Celestia for help?
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I'll admit i thought about it...but Celestia would have thrown the power balance in Titan's favour and it was 'predominatly' a dragon afair anyway. Also I didn't like the idea of introducing another major 'good' character this late on...sorry.
When the other four dragons show up i think you used the wrong for in there its for not four.
Other than that i like.
Aside from some homonym errors that I noticed, well done. Your speed did little to deteriorate the quality of the chapter. Also, I agree with Shadow, Thane is the most awesome thing ever in the history of things that are awesome.
squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
thane is best dragon
Holy shit! Thane is a badass! Did he just invent the Sonic Thaneboom???
Overall a great chapter, though the fight with a couple of the other dragons couldve been extended, and I felt like Titan and Storm couldve gotten into a one on one. Though I guess thats a bit cliche. The only real complaint is that there are a few grammar errors. Other than that though were good! Thanks for another chapter to read! 9/10 for this chapter!
Woohoo! Sonic Flameboom!
Thane = best dragon and ThaneDash is now my OTP! 
YAY
also it called a companion story
Fluttershy is a badass for standing up to Storm.
I can't wait for the next story.