Every night before my birthday, I have the same dream. I get adopted by THE Princess Celestia, and spend what seems like 2 years with her as her daughter. I've been having this dream since I was six-years-old. It sounds too good to be true, and I agree. I bet every young mare dreams of being related to royalty. But a continuous dream about it is ridiculous. But then why does it look like they actually happened? Like it's from an alternate life? And why do I feel that, because it looks so real, I truly am the………daughter of Celestia?
"Dark" tag's for some fighting and a small bit of gore, but it's okay for everyone
Chapters (1)
Good luck with this.
5132682 you... you like it?
5132765 It is. And thanks for the feed back
MMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
Let's see...
Weird grammar mistakes? Check.
Odd character decisions? Check.
Need of editor? CHECKCHECKCHECKCHECKCHECK!!
I sound like I don't like your story, but really, I do. It's a good start, but it's obviously your first story.
I could edit if you want...
5132682
I think a self insert wish fulfillment OC story doesn't deserve luck.
5132914 Tough crowd, eh?
I loved the beginning but I feel it could have been longer but it was still good I can't wait for the next chapter
If you want I can be your editor. Send me a PM
5133870 Ack! The words! THE WORDS!
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5133870 the whole daughter of celestial thing will make sense in the next chapter
5135771 You can do that, how do I send a PM?
ok Tia is the mouther.... WHO is the her dad?
5151195 At the moment, no one knows, not even me. I'm still figuring out if I should do a story about Star's birth parents, and if I do, what's it about, I have no clue.
5155112 sorry but i trought tia IS her birth mouther? it would be nice if that was so. but its your story and hopefully not the only story.
5157876 Thanks, expect to see more
, the relationship between Star and Tia will be revealed next chapter
this looks like a great story, did the author abondone it ?
6514791 sorry,
I probably should make an explanation in a big post 