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Why is this rated mature?!
5128169 There's going to be some pretty intense stuff later on. It'll be kind of slow at first, but when hell goes down, it's going to get pretty freaking dark.
5128181 Ooooooooh snap
I might do fanart
5128919 That would be totally awesome. Can't wait to share what I have in store.
5129197 Holy crap, new chapters sure do come out fast. Do you write them beforehand and then publish them?
5130604 Well I have most of the story done so far, so it's just a matter of me uploading them.
Looks cool! I'll give it a try.
*claps hands*
Don't you mean he? Since Chthon is a male.
Just came across this story, and I have to say it is one of the best Human in Equestria stories I've read thus far. Keep it up!
Chthon is making me angry!
5128169 Maybe because something is going to happen later on in the story to make it more mature
You forgot Pinkie's name here.
Did you mean 'read' instead of 'need'?
Take out that period and space at the beginning of the sentence.
The part I Bolded needs to be fixed, I can't figure out quite what you meant though.
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*looks at coverart* Despare?
5515885 Thanks. I'm not the best writer, but I'm putting all of my effort into this story. Thanks for the comment and more would be greatly appreciated.
5516010 Yeah thanks for catching that. I may need to ask the artist who did it to revise that in the future.
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Shipping potential...AJ and RD...........haven't finished the story yet but it got me wondering...
Seriously....i have read enough story to know when someone is having an interest in you...this guy is that dense? or e is not on the internet enough?
Hmmm the changeling queen is playing with power she doesn't understand...
......I would probably dropping nukes with the power of the sun on their planet until it is nothing more than scorching rock...
pretty good so far. And i like the harry potter reference
Good story so far. However, I just know he's not gonna get to keep silent forever. READING ON! And choosing fitting music as I go. That's always fun.
Holy shit, man... The emotions... The love and pain...
Author of the year, right there. *genuine applause*
5613023 Thanks for the comment, but I'm far from author of the year. I'm not the best writer but I'm putting all my effort in this story as well as trying to do every character close to how they are portrayed in the show along with realistic reactions towards the situations they're in. Thanks for following and please give your thoughts on the following chapters.
I wonder if a group of changelings will show up asking celestia and Luna for help... At this point, I kinda hope that's what happens, but with the way this story's been going, I won't hold my breath. It's been awesome, though.
Idiots! They could have used the power of the Time Gem to undo Chrysalis' survival! They could have simply turned back time and ended it the proper way! WHY THE HELL DID THEY JUST GIVE UP?!
5337733 Thanks I'm humbled that you think so. I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story and give your thoughts about it.
I don't see any possible way to stop this... It's gone too far.
WHY DID THEY HAVE TO DIE?!
It's just so sad... so... hopeless.... I couldn't stop crying the whole time. Especially with that music playing.
Even though im on the 5th chapter you need to change to people to pony/ponies. To what Spike said. Also the main character needs a little more emotion of being in a new world. But like I said im only on the 5th chapter. Hopefully the story well get juicy.
5663587 Ok thanks for catching that and please continue giving feedback on later chapters
5621541
Chrysalis argues with HERSELF a few chapters back, twilight notices a familiarity inside chrysalis' voice, and it started with the first gem, which after contact with chrysalis STARTS planning to find the other 5 of. Then saying about having the gems powers "again" after getting all the gems, but chrysalis JUST learned of the gems?
Voice, urge for power (AGAIN), wanting to be queen of equestria and everything after that.
That spells nightmare all over it.
Also chrysalis' body being different, ESPECIALLY being red instead of green being the BIGGEST change? The Nightmare...has returned...AGAIN!!!!
Sorry mate, im on chapter 17 and can't deal with this story. Not going to lie though there were some interesting little things here and there but as a new human enter a new one, Just a little confuse but deals with it way to fast. AJ getting feelings for him also fast. Don't know how the main character personality is like, maybe if I was to continue far enough it might show but suppose the beginning might show some light if it where to happen in the first place. Everyone has their cup of tea of things, guessing this one isn't mine.
5671904 we'll I'm planning on revising the story in the future but I appreciate you giving my story a chance though
....This story is really good.
And with how it's going, It might be one of my favorite stories as well :D.
Another main character who doesn't believe that he is actually in love. You are you idiot, get used to it XD
It's like quentein wants problems and just wants all the girls to love him -_-.
What a dummy XD.
Complications.
Discord, Yay XD.
Also, Relationship problems? Oh my.......
Wow.
Craziness man XD
And fate happened.
You can't stop it, Because it was made to happen anyways.
Nice.
Love this C:
5672911 This is a very awesome story.
Please, Keep up the amazing work :D.
Again, He.
5865209 Thanks for the catch. I changed it.
5865281 Ok