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Nightshimmer


Writing for me is to come up with an idea and then let the story wander off free so you can write the events down.

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Blueblood's feeling torn between his duty as a prince and his true feelings.
[takes place between season 1 and 2]
[based on one of my old headcannons]

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Maybe its because I'm rusty with finding my own grammar errors anymore but everything seemed fine to me.
As for the story itself I like how you left who it is hes going to marry up in the air. I'm putting this in my group"the good prince" btw.

I like the premise and concept of this story. I would really like to see this continue. However, you REALLY do need a proofreader.

Comment posted by Frankie2 deleted Oct 11th, 2014
Comment posted by Bronzedragon deleted Oct 11th, 2014

I have to see where this is going.

Complete or not... I am intrigued

Get a proofreader, and then call me.:twilightangry2:

It's always better to make decisions if you have a rested mind

Well, the same seemes to apply when writing FIMfictions. (I wrote this between midnight and 1am)

And just a question, did anyone figure out who he was engaged to?

5130051 Twilight or applejack.

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