It started as a routine operation on a distant world to mine for minerals. But what the crew of the Luna don't realize, is that Equis isn't the only inhabited planet.
5215627 It's just so awesome despite how short it is!!!!!! Space ponies discovering remains of humans and tech while soon encountering their (humans) enemies is an extremely cool concept/trope. Also, I just love the space horror that Aliens give!!!! Could you possibly do a related story at some point with the Predators?
5215823 I've been thinking about doing a Predator crossover, but I'd like to get this and a few other things out of the way before I start anything else new. I already have several stories that need updates on top of this, so don't expect the Predator one too soon.
5219285 well, AppleDash is kinda my OTP and I put it in every story. The others are just to make character deaths (don't be surprised that I said that) more emotionally devastating for those that survive. I won't spoil who is going to die, but considering (this is kinda spoilery, though it's only the next chapter so not too much) the fact that they are the only six going to the human ship it'd be pretty obvious that some are going to die. Especially considering what killed the original crew.
5228311 Yeah. I really don't like shipping. I can look past it though. I always think of stories in my own way. I think about the stories and then turn them into something I like.
if you find something unusual the only thing it could be is ALIENS*INCEPTION* BWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG
I like so far, and hope to see where it goes in the near future. Keep up the good work.
Aww man! I was gonna make an "Alien" crossover! Ya beat me too it!
Oh well, in any case, this looks awesome. Ill give it a read.
Nice cliffhanger and title reference!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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With grammar like that, maybe it's for the best you're reading more than writing.[/notserious]
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With an attitude like that, maybe it's for the best that you piss off
Nice job. Posting on All Hallows' Eve? Instant Fave.
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Heh, sorry. Couldn't help myself, I nit-pick grammar more often than I should.
On a more general note, I like the story so far, though the shipping level is FedEx.
So.............update soon???????????????????????????
5215554 sooner or later. Seeing how well it's doing. Not daily, though. The first alone took me like a week at least to write. So...
5215627 It's just so awesome despite how short it is!!!!!! Space ponies discovering remains of humans and tech while soon encountering their (humans) enemies is an extremely cool concept/trope. Also, I just love the space horror that Aliens give!!!! Could you possibly do a related story at some point with the Predators?
5215823 I've been thinking about doing a Predator crossover, but I'd like to get this and a few other things out of the way before I start anything else new. I already have several stories that need updates on top of this, so don't expect the Predator one too soon.
5211615 hey, I could have NOT warned you about the shipping at all. At least it's in the description so you know it's there before you start.
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OH, I wasn't complaining, simply mentioning that it's really prevalent.
5219285 well, AppleDash is kinda my OTP and I put it in every story. The others are just to make character deaths (don't be surprised that I said that) more emotionally devastating for those that survive. I won't spoil who is going to die, but considering (this is kinda spoilery, though it's only the next chapter so not too much) the fact that they are the only six going to the human ship it'd be pretty obvious that some are going to die. Especially considering what killed the original crew.
Awesome so far :PinkieSmile:
I'll try not to explode from the shipping.
5228002 in the good way or the bad way?
5228290 I'm not a fan of shipping.
5228293 I see... Well, at least I warned you in the description before you got too far.
5228311 Yeah. I really don't like shipping. I can look past it though. I always think of stories in my own way. I think about the stories and then turn them into something I like.
Reading the description, a pony xeno wouldn't be that hard to do. The alien in Alien 3 was primarily quadrupedal.
5235581 But that one came from a dog. So...
5235842 true, but it shows that such mutations are possible, just food for thought ☺
5236103 I know. I just felt the need to have human hosts.
if you find something unusual the only thing it could be is ALIENS*INCEPTION* BWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG
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