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DeepThought


"Forty-two," said Deep Thought, with infinite majesty and calm.

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I don’t know if I’ve truly died or lost my mind. What is reality, what is sanity? Are they not just a product of society, a unit to be measured? Something that can be judged, evaluated, and constricted by belief, but also something that is limited by our very biology? I’m not really sure, yet I believe myself to be sane, and have decided to embrace my own reality. One born purely from thought, bound by the limitations of my imagination. This… is a tale of ”my” reality, my triumphs, my mistakes, and the sins of a father.

Co-authored by his Highness Lord of Hentai.
Edited by The Magic Hobo, Regun and mikesnipe.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 240 )

This is off to a great start cant wait to read more about the fallen god!

OOH my god! there's a looong time i haven't seen a good story like that!:raritystarry:

I just wanted to let you know that, with mature turned off, this was VERY briefly in the featured box.
Hope it's back again when I check later! :heart:

18000 words in the very first chapter. I like this story very much! :yay:

wonderful!!! simply Wounderful!!! best thing i read in a long while, a nice well written original story, or is it original? i dont know. but please tell me if there is, i ablolutly adore it when the main character is a God. but back to the point, nice universe created, jolly good details for how he created it and the Past, and bla bla bla. Just keep it up. Ta-Ta!!

It's been far too long since a fanfiction. No, Since any fiction has ever caught me up this hard. I read it all in one go and am saddened to have to do something else till the next chapter.

Please continue.

Interesting concept. Let's see if it becomes anything more.

Such a great start to a story with a great depth. This is what I hope to see when I look for new stories in fanfiction. Brilliant start sir or madam hope to see more.

can see that this is a really good fic it deserves an upvote but it just isn't my taste, sorry but it is a brilliant fic and I hope you have many a happy time writing it and seeing others praise it..

GOOD LUCK

Very interesting, genuinely hyped for this.

6640909 is in the featured box right now with mature on

At first my reaction to the summery was:

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Then half-way through I was like this:

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And by the end of the chapter I was like this:

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So, yeah... I'm pretty hype right now. Looking forward to more.

This is good story, be proud my good sir/madam.

This was really good. It's been long since I've read a well-written story from the perspective of a god. I'll definitely read more of this.

Please continue! :pinkiehappy:

Very nice, quite intriguing. I shall follow, in order to see where you shall lead.

...Boy, that came out more pretentious than I meant...:facehoof:

This was awesome! :raritystarry:
I usually take two to three chapters before giving my thumbs-up to a story, but this earned it right now.
Very well written, great intro! :twilightsmile:
In a separate note:

But still, this tale is my reality. For all of this to make sense, I guess I will have to share it with you as a whole. It may not be the story of a hero, but I’d hardly consider myself to be the villain of this tale. You can judge for yourself, if you feel the need.
Good, it seems like we’ve come to an understanding.

Stop breaking the fourth wall! :flutterrage: Only Pinkie can do that! :pinkiesmile:

6643702 I'm flattered, thank you. I'm quite overwhelmed by the response to this story. :pinkiesmile:

Oooohhh. :pinkiegasp:

This is new. I like this idea!

I found great pleasure in watching the Elements renewed meddling with the world. If their life was a TV show I’m certain it would be an exceptionally successful one.

:rainbowlaugh:

I can't wait for more.

:rainbowderp: Holly crap dude. Yes! Yes, I will join you!

6643961 Is that an innuendo? :raritywink: But honestly, thank you. :pinkiesmile:

in the end of the week this story will have more than 300 'likes' :twistnerd: it deserves ^^

Looking good. Can't wait for next chapter

This had a lot of time and effort put into it.

Let me see if I interpreted this correctly. At the end of our world, our main character died and went to a black void. In the void he realized his thoughts could come to life, and so he imagined what would eventually become Equestria.

I really like the "you create your own afterlife from scratch" style of Heaven idea you are playing with.

Fantastic job on this!

Great story, can't wait to se how it turns out.

"Co-authored by lord of hentai"
:twilightoops: thanks for the mental image.

6644558 still a better love story than twilight

As a programmer, this is why setting up a version control system would be one of my first priorities. Discord fucked up half the planet?
git reset --hard HEAD
In fact, I'd set up a dead man's switch to automatically return the world to a known safe state if I don't check in for a long while.

H'yes!

Show me your mo-uh... Show me more chapters!

(Played to much ssb)

6644883 I agree, but it looks like once something is done he cannot change it, time is still beyond his control.

So many questions uanswered. Pleas sir can i have some more chapters?

Well this is promising, keep up the good work.

this is the best fucking piece of narrative I read -ever-

6645862 Geez, thanks, I hope I can live up to everyone's high expectations with the next chapter. :twilightoops:

6645874
Oh jeez now I spoiled all the fun.
Just do what you always do, write. Don't bother with the -expectations- :applejackconfused: we are not telling you what to do or how to do it. On the contrary, it's seems you got a really good imagination so you just do your things.

best story ever
(elements of harmony, rip away power from there creator ???? read it right ?)

6646203 You're the co-author dude, yeah? I gots a question for ya that may or may not be a small hole in the story. We've seen clearly from the show that Twilight can travel through time, even if only temporarily, using magic. And since this guy created magic and is many many times more powerful than Twi, why wouldn't he have some control over time?

6646605 I'd personally say that it would probably break his pocket universe if there were two of him at the same time.
edit: if he transported himself through time like twilight did to clarify.

What a refreshing concept. I've been waiting for something new for quite a while now. Makes me happy that your story came around.

6646690 so he is able to "rewind" time, but the timeline will always be set in stone once an event happens?

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