• Member Since 23rd Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 25th, 2014

Dr Dash


Who needs a medical license when you've got STYLE?

E
Source

Discord has realized the Mane 6's friendship is too strong for him to face head on. He goes back in time to destroy it completely, thrusting Twilight and Spike into an adventure that spans their lifetimes. After discovering that Discord's changes in the past are causing chaos in the present, the only way for Twilight and Spike to fix Equestria is to go back to the future!

*Author's Note*

Be warned, there is going to be some sad and dark stuff in this story, but I don't think it's enough to warrant the use of either tag.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 26 )

Good, but I think they'd all remember if chocolate rain and pink clouds were about. I dont think Twilight would have to remind them. But good story!:ajbemused::derpyderp2::pinkiecrazy::rainbowhuh::scootangel::twistnerd::unsuresweetie::trixieshiftleft::rainbowkiss::pinkiegasp::derpytongue2::ajsleepy::ajsmug::fluttercry::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::trixieshiftright::yay::trollestia::twilightangry2:

I'm SO gonna read this later! No time now. But why is Doctor Whooves no in the cast CELESTIA DAMMIT!! I DEMAND THE DOCTOR!!
I'm just assuming from the character tags.

Stay frosty my delicious friends. Silver, out! :pinkiehappy:

488789

I'm planning on him coming in at some point, but I was just trying to stay at the 5 character max

488796
Oh. Alrighty then. And it looks like I do have time to read it. Reading during lunch at school is bliss.

488762

I'll be making changes to it eventually. But yes, I'll probably have them all realize at the same time. I'm trying to build suspense by having the main 6 not mention discord until their suspicions are confirmed

Just finished reading chapter 1. And I agree with Storm Breaker. I'm FAIRLY certain that the others would remember the chocolate rain. Especially Pinkie. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2::pinkiesick::pinkiesmile:

Stay frosty my delicious friends. Silver, out! :pinkiehappy:

New Edit: Changed the storyline a bit so that all of the main 6 remember what happened last time.

Suddenly, a Wild Chapter 2 Appeared!

This one is a bit short, but the chapter is mostly dialogue. I might go back to expand on Discords arrival, to make it a bit longer.

:moustache: Don't give into peer pressure author. Only put D.W in if you want to and he can fit nicely into your story. The last thing this needs is a fancanon character forced in, taking the spotlight away from the main characters.

489100

A fair point. It did put the idea in my head to include him, but we'll have to see

ok first thing i noticed is the cover pic. Really Back to the Future?

Got to read this....

Will Derpy make an appearance in this storyline of yours ? :pinkiesad2:

489345

As Dragon Master Spike said, I dont really want to change too much of my idea. So i'm not sure

:yay: Aw yeah, Editor-In-Chief is in the house.

(Sorry man, had to post it :twilightsheepish:)

489114 A good compromise could be to have him just have cameo appearances, like he's working on something in the background, but we only see him when his path crosses with that of the main six. I hope I'm not being presumptuous by suggesting something...
I love Dr. Whooves, but if he can't be included in a way that works, I think it would be better not to.
That's my two cents.

491259

When the time machine begins to show up in the story, I have a nod to him planned:twilightsmile:

hahaha this is the first back to the future refrence i have actually seen in this story

Ummm.... the plot needs fixing.... a LOT! But the story idea is really good. I think there should be more depth to the characters though. :pinkiesmile:

I need to show this to my mom, she loves the Back To The Future franchise.

Are you going to continue this story anytime soon?

good plot idea. too bad it's deader than a doornail.

Login or register to comment