• Member Since 27th May, 2014
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Zee The Freeman


The platitudes of insanity only give respite to the edgelords.

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Gummy is happy with Pinkie Pie, right? They always share a good laugh with their wacky antics. Yet somehow it always feels kind of one sided. He never speaks, and rarely smiles. Has anypony ever asked him how he feels? I wonder what he might say about his best friend. Maybe he's silent because he's never truly alone.

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This is amazing! How has this not skyrocketed to the featured box?!

5127634 Umm...I dunno. I'm really glad you like it though, you're too kind. :twilightsheepish:

Good god man!? Who knew Pinkie was.....*Sigh* it's always the cute ones. Great story, I honestly didn't see that coming.

Whoa . . . cool and ominous! Me likey! :pinkiecrazy:

5128961 Thanks for the note, I'll fix that up now :pinkiehappy:

5128098 have you not heard of cupcakes? Of course she is a murdered, she shows indicators of mania and hypomania. As such, she might go this crazy.

5132632 Actually, Cupcakes was a bit of inspiration:pinkiehappy:

A swift strike with her free hand communicated her message.

Unless this is secretly anthro or humanized, I think you meant "hoof".

The noise served to overbearing

I'm not sure what this is supposed to say, but it doesn't make sense.
Other than these though, I didn't notice any obvious errors. Also, This was a seriously chilling story. :rainbowderp: I liked the concept a lot. My only issue was that we never really got to see the motivation behind Pinkie's extreme behavior, so it seemed kind of out of character.

5133382 Thanks for pointing out those errors, I'm surprised I didn't see them before. :twilightsheepish: Also, on Pinkie's motivation, I'd like to think the reason it's not stated serves to make it just that much creepier.

Yooooooo, this story was amazing and this needs to be featured now.

This is amazing and I don't even like dark stories! Liked and favorited

5135658 do it. Kill her.

5136245 You want me to write a sequel and kill her in that?

Wow, this is dark o-o
Tag didn't lie.

5137406 I rarely lie. I mostly sit. :pinkiehappy:

5137680
I'm half and half on that myself :rainbowlaugh:
Also now that I think about it. Horses lie down rather than sit.
So does that mean that Applejack lies all the time? :applejackconfused:

5138071 Shhh....Don't want anypony thinking TOO deeply, now do we? :pinkiecrazy:

5136402 yes. Everyone wants her dead.

Wow, this was incredible. I loved Gumm's point of view. :3

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What a read. This was hilarious. (Don't question my sense of humour :pinkiecrazy:)

Why did I read this ting in a very gentlemanlike, high position kind of voice?

5734264 I imagine Gummy being a well rounded, educated gentleman.

After watching the "Slice of Life" episode, this story just gets better:pinkiecrazy:

I would like to see a sequel of this XD

6634129 After far too long, your wish shall be granted. I just need to write the blasted thing.

*deep breath*

Holy...motherbucker...from tartarus.....


This was sooooo freaking painful to read, dude! I was crying!!!!!

Poor little Gummy.....

*sob*


KILL THE PINK ONE:pinkiecrazy:

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