• Member Since 26th Feb, 2012
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Scarves


I enjoy reading more than writing. Even though I sometimes wish it was the other way around.

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I wanted to die.
I was so ready and so prepared to jump.
But I changed my mind, thanks to the kind words of an unlikely hero.
Now that I'm living a happy life it's about time I told the story of who saved my life.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

5215273 I didn't plan on writing any more on this particular one but since you bought it up, what sort of direction does 'more' mean? More ponies? More human? Or just more story? Or did you have any particular ideas? Speak to me!

5216167 I was thinking more story, like how he got a job, he hangs out with the little pegasis, make's a lot of friends, things like that.

5216324 In all honesty, this was just an idea I had after reading a failed suicide story and I just wanted a happier one. (As happy as the suicide topic can be anyway) I don't have any plans to write more. It took me a couple of months get this much out. Part lazy part anime and part procrastination. All the same thing really. I did plan on writing a bit of an epilogue. Months later he over hears a pony talking about how her son got his cutie mark and he hears the colts name pop up and then he hugs her or something like that but I have yet to write down any of it.

5216408 Well, it's your choice, so you do what you want to! I'll still read it.

5216408 And you didn't tell me! :fluttercry: But I thought I was a good pre-reading editor...<sad Faces>

5220991 There there now, you are a great pre-reading editor. I did mention I was going to but I never gave you any details because you didn't ask. But from now on I will try and be a little more open with my ideas. You do a great job editing by the way!

5221501 Awwww, Stop it!! Thank you! :twilightsmile:

You should write more chapters. I loved the story.

5232710 I really don't know where it would go from there honestly. It was just a one shot. But seeing as you are the second person to suggest it I am considering it. I just don't have any idea of what to write about. Anyway, thanks for reading this story!

5233438 It was a good story. Maybe you could just write it from the beginning. Or if not possibly just continue from the end.
As in him being led by the colt to his home etc.

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