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Spike didn't really know that he felt left out so much. Is he just in the background now, does his friends need him? Is he not that special anymore? Check out the story!

( This story takes after Power Ponies. All the way to Trade Ya.)

*Sorry guys I just don't remember the storyline of these after 4 years. *

(Help From CheesySense, Editor) (Help from BluegrassBrooke Editor)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 86 )

Not bad, not bad keep up the good work!

Earned a favorite from me! :pinkiehappy: Poor Hum Drum, he is just a tool for the Power Ponies, not a friend or sidekick. :fluttershysad: This doesn't look good though and might get upsetting. However, I hope that Twilight and the others won't actually do that to Spike like the Power Ponies do to Hum Drum.

5131353 Well, you'll have to wait ti'll the next chapter comes!:pinkiehappy:

5131247 I can't wait for the next chapter

5131398 Thanks, just trying to keep up with these notifications! Everyone is sending me it!:pinkiehappy::twilightoops::twilightblush::yay::heart:

Splendid job. I can't wait to see what else you got planned.

Comment posted by Speedy McSpeed deleted Oct 12th, 2014

There. Must. Be. More. :coolphoto:

5131663 Thanks, I am working on the next chapter right now!:heart::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

5131663 Oh, I have plans for him alright! mwhahaha!:pinkiegasp:

Poor Hum Drum can't catch a break! :fluttercry: And neither can Spike :applecry: Appreciation points for the unexpected romance :rainbowlaugh: Go get him, Filly Second! :rainbowdetermined2:

5131853 Yeah, I might put that in every story that I have that has Pinkie in it!:heart::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::twilightsheepish::twilightblush:

5131877 Oh my God yes :pinkiegasp::rainbowkiss::raritystarry: She is my favorite poneh :yay::twilightblush::rainbowdetermined2::heart:

5131885 Do you know who that stallion is?:twilightoops::pinkiegasp::derpyderp2::applejackconfused::applejackunsure:

Don't abuse the solids.

5131892 I'm guessing he like polka :coolphoto:

5131893 Well,:applejackunsure: the power ponies didn't do his solid. The Masked Matter -Horn fixed it though, by giving him her mother's cooking!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp: DUNDUNDUN!:pinkiegasp:

5131901 Maybe, or maybe not, who knows? There are about two references, i'll give you a hint, you already have one. You solved the first one.

Until I'm done with this story, I will give out the secrets,:pinkiegasp: and the people who solved it.

5131922 Okay, good, I'm on the right track then :pinkiehappy:

kinda seen that coming u know that right :applejackunsure:

5168107 :fluttershysad: well..... sorry if you don't like it...:pinkiesad2:

5168389 I didn't say that I just said it was obvious

:twilightoops: This is getting real good, but I'm afraid of what the next day might bring for Spike. :fluttershysad: However, I admit, he was being naïve and ignorant to the fact that those lazy bunch of mares, and with all due respect to Fluttershy, couldn't even lift a hoof to help him. :flutterrage: Looking forward to the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

>169030 Thanks! I worked really hard on this one, my head hurts. It's the longest chapter I've ever made.

Good humor and excellence pacing, I enjoyed the style!!

I enjoy the POV of. Humdrum!

Rarity lusted her eyelashes at Spike,

She did what now?

5246501 It's the thing she did in the episode.:twilightoops:

5246574 You mean when she batted her eyes?

Thanks for adding this to the group.

No offense to him or anything, but why does he stick around?

Uhhh, I really didn't like that episode. Seriously, Spike? You still have a crush on her? I honestly don't understand him for being in love with someone who knows how you feel about them and just abuses it to get themselves out of some work.

Was it really that bad in that episode though? It's been a while since I saw it.

5664994 Well I thought that episode was great. Except the Spike part. The poor thing.:fluttershysad:

5664983 Well, sorry if you don't like the story, I just wrote it because I wanted to see in my version of how he felt. I wanted people to see that Spike should have the same respect as anyone else.:fluttershysad::moustache:

5666767 That's not what I meant, the story is fine, I just don't understand why'd anyone would tolerate having so little respect for what they do.

5666846 Well from a show perspective the people making the show simply don't care about his character at all, and just consider him nothing more then a comic releif background character.
In show answer I guess would be doesn't think he has anywere else to go. When he tried running away he ended up in a cave. So it's either live as Twilight's slave or take his chances on the street.
Though why he doesn't go to Celestia or run away to the Crystal empire which worships him is anyone's guess.

5884698 well, I have a chance to fix that. I just want to show that Spike is a something. He's going through these troubles as a dragon, how he thinks. But, can't go farther than that. Might spoil some stuff.

5887606 Obviously. It's just that's it's downright lazy that the show runners will likely never adress these issues in the show itself, and that they only way this kind of stuff ever will be explored is in fanfiction.
I can understand someone like Cherrilee not being explored, because at the end of the day she really is just a background character.
But Spike is the most pomonent and well know secondary character on the show. And it just feels insulting to ignore what's almost a main character. Hell I think the CMC get more episodes and development then Spike does.

6381822 Hehe, so many people have been messaging me about that. :twistnerd: I'm trying to split my time between school and art right now. So it'll take time. Sorry. :pinkiesad2:

Err, what exactly happened in this chapter?

6449033 In this chapter, I was building up on the real point line. This chapter shows the feelings that Spike is getting. He's starting realize his place. Which leads into the nightmare that's following along with him. If that makes sense. Sorry. I haven't been writing a lot of mlp character stories. Only my own stories. With my own characters. :pinkiesad2:

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