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I have officially left Fimfiction. Thanks for the great 2 Years, Guys!

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Kurenai Wataru, a truth telling, shy 25 year-old man. He has lived on his own with his friend/self-proclaimed mother Shizuka in a very normal home. He's been through everything, from having a brother who's his enemy, his girlfriend dying from one of his enemies, the list goes on. A couple years after Nago and Megumi's wedding, Wataru was walking back to his home when he found a box that said on it, Give to a good home. Kivat understood what he was thinking and took the box home. When he opened up the box he found something he never thought he would see, a yellow pegasus with a pink mane and tail.

Kamen Rider Kiva sequel based on My Little Dashie and also a sequel to that as well.

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This is getting Good.

5115932 Thanks um does that mean I should do a sequel?

5116503 You choice, not my.

5117702 okay well after I'm finished with they're back Yujo Sentai Poniranger returns, I be writing another Kiva centered story

5118737 Good to hear that. Keep it up mate.

5118746 thanks, I actually didn't know how well this story would do and so far everything that isn't a sequel gets the thumbs up

I love this story, but I don't like the ending. I'm sorry, but I'm going to give some criticism but, I'm not really that much of a fan for the ending. I like the story as a standalone story, but a sequel to My Little Dashie? I'm sorry. But in MLD Rainbow Dash HAD to return to Equestria, and I loved that ending. I love this story, but the ending is just something that I don't think the Celestia in MLD would do. She's stop at nothing to get Fluttershy back to Equestria. I like the story, I mean it. But the ending really makes me think of this more along the lines of a story outside of the MLD universe, not a sequel. I'm sorry, but I just wanted to say that. I'm sorry again. I don't want to come off as a jerk, but that's just how I think. And the way Fluttershy was shown she's a cartoon character just felt too rushed to me. I'm sorry but it just felt a little rushed to me, like, it could've been dragged on a little bit more and show even more about the father and what he will do for Fluttershy. Again, I don't want to be a jerk. I just wanted to tell you how I feel. I'm sorry if this offends you in any way, or something.

5183200 actually this was exactly what I hoped for

What did I just read?:rainbowhuh:

5214851 A combination of My Little Fluttershy with a flare of Kamen Rider Kiva

5214999 why, this story doesn't really make since to me. Why is fluttershy in the real word?

5216228 sorry I haven't(yet) so yeah I might be missing something.

5750139 You should watch Kamen Rider Kiva! It's a great show! Too bad this is technically a sequel

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Author Interviewer

I wish you'd decided to write a comedy instead. Wataru would be the perfect protagonist for an MLD parody.

6573679 Ah- GODDAMMIT THAT'S FREAKING BRILLIANT! WHY THE HECK DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?! I guess that's why you are an Author Interviewer.

It was quite interesting. I would've had her become a new Kiva though. Or at the very least the next Saga.

Okay, as a fan of Kiva, I just had to read this and while for the most part, it was good, there were a few things that put me off. One, Celestia's characterization. I would think after seeing how happy Fluttershy is, she'd live and let be and a pointless fight could be avoided. Secondly, the Dark Kivat thing. It's Kivat the Second, not Dark Kivat. Finally, the images of the riders. Were they really needed? You could have described them really.

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Same here, she would make a great Saga now that Taiga's tossed that gear to the side in in favor of Dark Kiva and Kivat the Second.

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And the way Fluttershy was shown she's a cartoon character just felt too rushed to me. I'm sorry but it just felt a little rushed to me, like, it could've been dragged on a little bit more and show even more about the father and what he will do for Fluttershy.

Honestly, I have to agree. Amongst other things, this story felt pretty rushed. Didn't stop me from enjoying it, but...

Also, I have to wonder what Wateru's reaction would be if he found out his life was a TV show with all of his stuff on full display?

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