This story is a sequel to A Spiked Hologram
I was moving out on my eighteenth birthday, since I am now considered of age.
Pinkie Pie came along, bearing gifts in the form of three holographic characters; Rarity, Spike and Sweetie Belle, only she had spent a week, preparing them for me.
She had intended for Rarity to help me fulfil a dream, Spike was to be her assistant, while she simply couldn’t send Rarity off without Sweetie Belle, it just so happened to turn into a complete family, somewhere along the way.
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Good start :-)
5110997 Thanks.
Just hope I can keep it going and move over to where I had intended for the story to go.
Hmm... i think u copied urself with rares checkin out her new work area n' wantin tea thing
. Otherwise it's not bad i think 
5230476 I had the impression that Rarity was a tea kind of Pony, likely connected to her class aspirations.
Do you mean the description is too much like a previous description, but she had to check out what she was given.
If this is the case, I could go over and adjust it in order to feel better and more original?
Thanks, I hope the rest of the story will be as good as my prommies.
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Yes to both i guess
swhattt
5230666 When you said 'Copied', do you mean it was too much like the other story, or that it just feels overused?
If it is the former, I could try to refrase things in order for it to feel more fresh and come out in a different light.
I had the feeling Rarity is a very driven Pony, who likes to know what she has in order to stay on top, but she needs a moment of calm and quiet to unwind in order to work.
5256141 Uh?
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? Sorry i'm not t best pony to ask on things lik this 
I never read t first story before this; so idk but, on rares bein driven? um.... maybe
5258203 She is depicted as Driven in the show on numerous occasion.
I guess others write her in a similar way, she does have an eye for details, she has to check out new things.
Seems she wear/use glasses when she is working on important things.
You would still be qualified to have an opinion about the story, wouldn't you?
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Yes, just not detaily type stuff since i'm still techinally new to t writin scene here n' my memory isn't t best said stuff
5265212 Maybe I do go a bit overboard on deconstruction and twisting details to make the story work on occasion?
Yet, Rarity is doing everything from the fabric to the finished product, which commonly includes the sales.
The one thing she isn't good at is the Modeling, which was more of Flutter Shy's fate, as much as they both was proven to resent this.
It is hard to make a story about Rarity, without touching her fashion, even if I can move away from it, in order to show other facets of the gem known as Rarity.
Actually, showcasing other aspects of her is exactly what I am striving to, but ignoring her fashion at this point would kind of take her too far out of character, I think. Others may dissagree, which would be refreshing to have explained.