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That One Guy In The Back
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Nice job! :twilight smile: few grammatical errors here and there, but i like it!
5098444 Thanks!
5098450 no problem!
This is so sad....
Nice
Now that was dark and sad.
Sad and short
... still good though.
You know, although I am a huge Spike fan, I don't know why, but for some reason, I've wanted to read a fanfic about true abuse shown by Twilight toward Spike.
That is awful for me to say I know, but I say that, because I wanted to see or read how Twilight would react to her actions toward the one who supposed to be her best friend and little brother/son. 
It was sad, yet real good at the same time.
Im sorry, but the cover image just made me have to look.
Fear her! Fear Twilight Sparkle and her tiny, mutant leg!
5098623 I think you wan't to see the aftermath.
Meh........It was actually pretty boring. Well at the end there anyways, it was good in the middle part and then it turned south.
Really? Forgiving her after that?
5098623 There's plenty of fics under that category. I think it was called "Spike tells ponies off" or something like that.
Whhhhaaaaaat?!!!!!! Whaaatt?!!!!!
WOW!!!
he should rip her heart of with his claws
5098281
I Agree. Twilight is way, way OOC in this story. While it is certainly possible that she would lash out at him in a moment of anger, it would evaporate the moment she realized that she hurt him. That she not only continues to hurt him but also takes the time to bind him in rope suggests deep-seated malice on her part, as does the fact that she left him in the closet for two days (Loooong after any real frustration and anger would have abated) before suddenly growing a conscience for no adequately explained reason. Now, if she was under the influence of dark magic and was only recently cleansed of it then her behavior would make sense; but you don't imply anything like that so she has no excuse.
I'm sorry, but this story gets a downvote from me.
I saw the intro and thought this would turn out way different than it did. It was bad. Spike and Twilight were so OOC that if it weren't for their names, I wouldn't know where this story came from.
Sorry If I sound mean; I am not trying to be, Its just that I was disappointed. Maybe next time
5400016 Be disappointed then.
This story would work better as a parody as the Twilight in this story is completely OOC and over-the-top. Roughly abuse her oldest and (subjectively) closest friend because... she got sent a damaged book. Makes sense how Twilight earned her wings and title.
I'd tag this story: Random, Alternate Universe, Dark, Gore. Not really sad as this story makes little sense in general.
Grammar and spelling was alright, though.
Twilight take that book of yours and go burn in hell
and what is she going to tell the princesses and her friends
este fic no tiene mucho sentido que digamos, me parece una razón muy estúpido para darle ese tipo de "castigo"... si hubieras agregado mas acciones "accidentales" por parte del dragón, creo que funcionaria mejor... pero no estuvo mal para tu primer fic...
this fic doesn't make much sense, it seems to me a very stupid reason to give him that kind of "punishment"... if you had added more "accidental" actions by the dragon, I think it would work better... but it wasn't bad for your first fic...