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When your life is as bright as day in the world that surrounds you, the simple joys can make it all seem perfect. Sometimes all we need is a little color -- maybe red -- to reintroduce us to what truly makes life so fridgile.

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WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?! I WON'T EVEN PUT A STAR THERE JUST, WHAT THE FUCK!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

I was hoping for some duke nukem.
Fuck u author.

I swear I've read something similar to this... -_(o.0)_-
Anyways, only one typo I noticed:

and nestles back into my self...

For the P.O.V that should be 'me' :derpytongue2:

i think abuse is quite sexy with ponies, I really do wish he just hit her though and made her all bloody :)

eww, i managed to finish cupcakes eaiserer than this at least in cupcakes dashie! was gone quickly in this one its been like 15 years and them legs for stumps...gross....:applecry: and i feel so sad that this is the kinda think you think of poor poor you...

Beautiful. If i had children i would read this to them everynight :twilightsmile:

Pretty good.

5096457 You'll make a great parent

5096432 You seem mildly concerned

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:twilightblush: ...Erm... it wasn't my intention to make it sexy.

5096354 Your comment sorta confuses me :rainbowhuh:

I wrote it because I like dark themes. Cupcakes situation was no more less or more awful than this ones in my opinion. There Rainbow died a awful death by the hoof of her best friend- right outta nowhere.

Here, she's gone through years of abuse that led up to her legs being taken. By someone thats supposed to be her caretaker, and literally the only person she can talk to or even see.

5096187 Thanks bud! (And you seem familiar!)

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You okay there buddy? :rainbowhuh:

5097122 I'll be honest as well, I don't even get what I say most of the time so its clearly k if you don't get it either.

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Erm... My Little Dashie Forever?

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It was a rhetorical question.

5097264 Haha I know. Just joshing you.

5097134 JUST WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!.!.!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!? WHY EXPLAIN, EXPLAIN TO ME WHY WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Wow... it's good, but way to creepy for me! the scary part is that this guy really loves RD in his own sick and twisted way.... A great story, none the less! :heart:

5098260 I KNOW BUT THE ABSOLUTE FLYING FUCK MAN?!?!?!?!?!??!?@? JUST WHAT THE FLYING EVERY CURSE WORD EVER FUCKING SHIT MAN I DON'T EVEN!

5102040 Dude, calm down. It's only a story; no need to waste your time getting angry over it.

5102722 I'M NOT MAD JUST CREEPED THE FUCKED OUT

5111432 True this story is creepy, very much so. But before you start reading you see a dark tag, a tragedy tag, and a mature tag. It's kind of like going to a porn blog that, before you enter warns you of what's to come, and then talking about how gross porn is on said blog. You were warned, so you shouldn't go screaming " WHAT THE FUCK!?" in the comments.


And isn't all this a bit much? Sure it's scary, you have made your point, no need to keep going on about it. At this point you are overreacting.

It looks cool from the picture sorry for all you guys who disagree with me it's my thought no effencd

No matter how many times I read this it still delights me ^.^ Maybe because it's a perversion of a previously heart warming fic, or because I have deep emotional issues. Either way, awesome job.

5097122 I think he/she was trying to say that out of all the Rainbow Dash abuse fics, Cupcakes was easier to stomach than this, I think.

ALRIGHT! YOU HAVE JUST INSULTED ALL OF GER-MANY!! HOW DO YOU FEEL YOU IMBECILE!!! WHERE DO YOU LIVE!!?!?!?! I NEED TO SEND A NUCLEAR MISSILE WORDS YOU!!!! I DON'T CARE IF YOU PLEAD FOR FORGIVENESS!!! YOU NEED TO DELETE THIS STORY :twilightangry2::flutterrage::ajbemused:

5808365 You have MAJOR problems. This requires Celestia's help....I thought I would never say this to ANYONE but... KYS... I'm so sorry

What the Fuck is this, WHAT THE HELL SHIT IS THIS!!!!!:flutterrage:

WHAT THE SHIT FACE IS THIS!!!!

Now write Celestia and the others coming and seeing this. That dude is in so much trouble.

WHY IN THE EVER LIVING FUCK DID YOU WRITE THIS?! IM LOOSING FUCKING BRAINCELLS READING THIS SHIT

Ah yes, mlp version of fluffy abuse

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