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Darkly Hooves


<Apologies, but after a minor nervous breakdown, I took down everything I'd written and hacked it all up with the writer equalient of a hacksaw, I'm slowly piecing it back together though, thank you for your patience.>

"Everypony in this town are CRAZY!"
- Twilight Sparkle

"Picture it: The chaos capital of the world."
- Discord

"Woof! Woof woof!"
- ??? (Screw Loose?)

Twilight Sparkle made a very keen observation upon arriving in the fair town of Ponyville. Which was also rather close to the truth. Almost everypony in Ponyville are crazy to some degree. It was intentional... Them being there, not them being crazy, that is. Though precautions had to be taken so one did not end up crazy as well. The town may have originally been settled by the Apple family to form part of Equestria's breadbask- er, applebasket, but its centralized location, safety and isolation from anywhere important meant it was also ideal to house the eccentric outbursts of its residents without bothering anypony. Several key members of Ponyville worked as doctors in addition to the "real" doctors. Gauging and checking up on the residents and ensuring they feel useful or simply providing some much needed social interaction... For the extreme cases Ponyville had a hospital facility with its own mental ward.

Occasionally strangers pass through town, unaware of its purpose. They tend not to stay long.

Sometimes they stay longer than they'd planned...

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Comments ( 2 )

This would be my very first fanfiction... I've no idea what I am doing or where I am going with this. I'm pretty sure recycling the main charactor as a online handle counts as self-insertion. The characterizations might not be spot on.. Not sure if I'm inserting myself into the story or if I'm inserting my character into the world. But something's being inserted somewhere. :twilightsmile:

Okay that sounded horrible. Nobody is inserting anything anywhere. :twilightblush:

Okay, the thermometer is inserted someplace. :twilightoops:

Just... just try to enjoy it. :facehoof:

.. The fiction. Not the thermometer. :facehoof::facehoof:

*rereads fiction* ... It's normal for the author to hate his own stuff, right? ._.

Its "All the ponies in this town are CRAZY!" - Twilight Sparkle not everypony. who knows i most likely will read this later.

Edit: I would like to ask... why did you decide to delete the chapter? Even if you did hate it doesn't mean that others would. Even if it is bad that just means that there is room for improvement.

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