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This amused me far more than it should have. Paragraph spacing looks a bit odd but I'm reading on a mobile platform so even odds say that's a factor.
Only grammatical snafu that jumped out at me was the use of the word "protruded" when I think you meant "penetrated". Not that Shiny wasn't protruding as well...
Annnd then the spell doesn't wear off for another week. That throne of hers is gonna get mighty slippery...
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Thank you very much for that.
That cover photo has me laughing too hard
You, lady, made my night XD
That image sold me!
Love it!
Top of the kek
pretty good~
The one person who downvoted this obviously doesn't like orgasms. Tsk tsk.
Short, sweet, and random. That was nice.
Have a good day, JustAnotherReader. 
I'll be honest I totally read this fic cuss if the cover pic but was not disappointed
You're not just another reader...
Clopfic-Ex-Machina
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Now THIS made my day.
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No, the paragraphing is quite awkward.
That is one SERIOUS ahegao.
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So did I. This is a perfect example of how having good cover art is important. Story was worth the read, too.
Remember when people used to actually write about things, and people would actually read it?
You know. Those stories that didn't involve the words "member" "penetration" and "throbbing"?
good times.
This is why you dont got to 11 out of a possible 5
It was an alright story, too quick for my preference but humble up!
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A member of the Parliament was involved with the penetration of the mystery surrounding the intrigue that had been throbbing at the heart of Luna's return.
The cake that had gone missing was found in Celestia's chambers. The land could rest easy again. There was no mysterious cake thief.
~Your loyal cake investigator, Pinkie Pie.
Just fucking great.
5085910 that was just brilliant. *claps and wolf whistles*
And that was the day that every maid in the crystal palace quit.
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Well, that was cute and enjoyable, if the tiniest bit rushed.
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I'm super sorry.
I promise I'll try to put more work in if I ever write another story for this site.
5088048 Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa! Please don't cry!
Please do not take my comment to be negative; I did enjoy the story as far as it goes. It was a cute little story, no more no less.
I enjoyed the couple of minutes worth of effort put into reading it.
It seemed a little rushed, but that doesn't detract hugely from enjoying it.
I hope you continue writing; maybe for the next one, you might like to find a beta or proofer (if you'd like an unsolicited opinion).
Behold Honest Pony and Bookworm Pony as proof of my sincerity:
Tee-hee! It's too rare that I get to read about this sort of indirect mind control in erotic fiction...
As long they don't rut it in front of the Crystal Heart.
Nice and cute but a bit short.
Can we skip the chitchat and discuss the sequel to a oneshot?
That is all my friends.
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You sir have given me a great idea
When you read it, you'll shit brix...from laughing too hard.
5086849 Well, there goes my story about the member of an organisation who was famous for his penetration into the market, now down for the count due to a throbbing headache.
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The Slip and Slide Throne.
Well....... I'm not gonna say that Shiny didn't get what he wished for..... because he most certainly did.
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Owned
Love it.
Write more. You kick ass.
I loved it all it was awesome and funny.It had me cracking up.I hope that there will be a sequel.
Really funny story, liked how you had Cadence smoking at the end.
My takeaway was thinking of Cadence saying "take it up da butt" and cackling maniacally.
This needs a humor tag to it too
Haw! Loved it!
5087438 The butlers stood at attention, and their little friends did too.
Pretty big fan of 'pleasure overload' romps like this. Would love to see more, maybe with another princess trying to go through her day under the effects of the spell.
Nicely done!
This is the single greatest Cadence line I've ever read.