• Published 2nd Nov 2011
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Pinknesia: The Darker Descent - Wolokai



Pinkamena is back! And this time, she'll have to go into darker places to save Twilight Sparkle!!!!!

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(For those Tracking!) The Third Fic!

Hello all!!! Just letting those who are keeping track of the story or tracking so far, the Third Story is awaiting submission and will be up soon! Already got a prologue cranked out so enjoy! Be sure to check regularly for updates or anything like that. The Chapter submissions might be a little bit more spaced out this time, but we'll definitely see.

Prepare for the Darkest Descent of them all! Thank you so much for your comments, love you all!

-KuRR

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2747/Pinksomnia%3A-The-Darkest-Descent

Comments ( 7 )
#1 · Nov 19th, 2011 · · ·

:pinkiecrazy:Glorious fanfics are glorious please keep up the awesome work 4 I have like them both
Pinkamena: The Dark Descent
Pinknesia: The Darker Descent
Now time 2 read the next one :twilightsmile:

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Yeah sometimes I get pony and human anatomy mixed up sometimes...I don't know why :ajsleepy: lemmie go fix that...

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It's ok,

I would make the exact mistake too. :pinkiesmile:

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All right. Critique time! While the plot is excellent, you make a hell of a lot of errors in structure and form that really take away from it. One of the most prevalent of these is that issue with paragraphs, which I believe I mentioned before. That and knowing that everyone who died will come back really takes all the suspense out of it. Then there's the OOC ness of most of the characters...

Overall, it's not the best I've read, but it ranks up there. Not too shabby.

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You're welcome. Plus, thanks for reminding me about this story. I know what I'm re-reading now. :pinkiehappy:

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