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Star Phantom


I'm a guy who loves Video Games and is a Brony. I get different ideas for the mane six and mostly into game crossovers.

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Rainbow Dash is the fastest Pegasus on Equestria. She has gone on many adventures and stop many villains. When Discord is up to his old tricks by kidnapping Fluttershy and plan to misuse the Elements of Harmony, Rainbow goes to to stop him. During the fight, the Elements send the Mane Six and Discord to a new world where new friends and adventures await! Base off of Sonic X.

Rainbow Dash-Sonic
Twilight Sparkle-Tails
Applejack-Knuckles
Pinkie-Amy
Fluttershy-Cream
Rarity-Rouge
Discord-Dr. Eggman

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 21 )

ah wow um... ok, there's no real way to suger coat this:
The story so far is a copy and paste story of sonic X but with mlp characters.

That's really my only problem with this story so far.

Now I don't want to sound evil here, I know the first chapter can make or brake the story for the reader. So I'm giving it the benefit of the doubt and wait for the other chapters for the story before I make an opinion.

so I'll I'm suggesting is a little more variety in the story. Have the mlp characters do something different then what the show did. That's all I have to say for now.

Good luck!

Good. I OFFICIALLY DECLARE THIS... good but mediocre.

5095008 I plan on doing that in the next chapter.

5103813 sweet looking forward to it. :ajsmug:

Overall, good story,but a lot of grammatical errors in your story. Some of the sentences did not make any sense and your verbs did not agree with the subject. Be sure to fix that come next chapter. But still, not bad for a first chapter. Look forward to seeing more and hopefully you're writing and story will improve since it is based off on one of favorite video game characters of all time.....SONIC! Happy editing!:raritywink:

5105405 Thanks, I also plan on doing the other TV Sonic Shows, Sonic SATAM and Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog and once it come on, Sonic Boom as well. No Sonic Underground, not a fan. Don't hate that one, just not a fan.

THIS STORY SHALL BE NAMED AWESOMENESS INCARNATE

not a bad chapter, keep it up!

5105574 Too much singing?

5334727 Trust me, I seen it and it funny. What do you mean too much singing?

5334749 Sonic underground.

5334797 Not really a fan of that show over all.

So... Is there gonna be a new chapter soon? It's good.

Where did you get the cover art?

5104142 Where did you get the icon for your avatar?

5581528 did a screen crop on the double rainboom video

5581517 Found it on deviantart.com.

5103813
I simply love stories that make crossover with my hero, Sonic. I only have one question: If Rainbow Dash is Sonic, Tails is Twilight and Applejack is Knuckles, who is going to be Shadow?

6388069 I'm thinking on that. I might use Firefly from G1 since some people think that who Rainbow was base off of.

If you aren't going to continue this, you should make it say cancelled. If you are going to continue this, then when?
If you do want to continue this, but are having trouble then maybe I could help you with it, or someone else.

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