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ShadowFirePon3


Artist, voice actor, writer, Brony

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After the grand galloping Galla, Soarin could not stop thinking about the amazing pie he had, and the pony who made it. Spitfire sees that this is interfering with his performance, and let's him go to try and find the pony to clear his head.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

That was a nice story. But the switch from 1st person to 3rd person caught me off for a second. The ending was just lovely though :heart:

Nice little story. Good luck with future chapters.

5083445 No future chapters. This was made as a entry for a short, apple related fanfic competition last year. I guess I could continue the story if I felt like it, but all that really happened was that I was cleaning out some old documents on my computer and just stumbled on this old thing. Thought I should post it in case anyone might enjoy the little story. Glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting.

Switching narrative styles like that was confusing, but I liked it. :pinkiehappy:

5089784 good, always glad to know someone likes what I've done. thank you.

Great chapter I find the pairing something I didn't expect but I liked the story line and I hope this isn't a one shot cause I would hope it is a short series. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one.:eeyup:

Well I got to say this was a pretty interesting one but a cute one so it looks like Soarin has been really distracted lately ever since the grand Galloping Gala and he wanted to find her but she disappeared afterward and he searched around for her but unfortunately she's nowhere to be found especially in Ponyville apparently she was very busy since the Cutie Mark Crusaders to help him but no luck and he felt really down after that and spitfire wants to cheer him up that sooner he'll see her soon but it looks like very soon as they expected and he got the pie from Applejack again very nice and I kind of wish to see more story of this but anyway keep up the good work

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