Princess Celestia's Break

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Princess Celestia needs a break. After a thousand years of non-stop hard work with no break, Celestia decides that she needs one. Now. Of course, a Princess can't have breaks, so she goes to Queen Chrysalis for help.

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SeventhBrony

SeventhBrony #1 · Sep 29th, 2014 · · ·

on the read later list, but just from the description I seriously doubt that what happens can be shaved down enough to be considered comedy OOOH Those POOR POOR ponies and changlings sides hurting forseen on this

Perteks

Perteks #2 · Sep 29th, 2014 · · ·

NOOOO you just must continue it, Its way to good to be that short

Dream Seeker

Dream Seeker #3 · Sep 29th, 2014 · · ·

5073542 Hmm... I'll consider it. Maybe a scene where the Royal Guard use tickle torture to try to find out what Chrysalis has done with Celestia...

Felicia Shawkross

Felicia Shawkross #4 · Oct 3rd, 2014 · · ·

Oh Comedy, you genre that is so hard to perfect and so easy to mess up. Luckily you at least delivered what little comedy you had fast, which is the exact point of comedy. If the joke drags on too long it is not as funny anymore, much like Duke Nukem Forever is only fun if you pick it up and then immediately throw it into a shredder.

No dilly-dallying, no excessive rubbish clogging the brain. Straight to the point and swift. This is acceptable.

Dream Seeker

Dream Seeker #5 · Oct 3rd, 2014 · · ·

5091453 I'm glad you thought I did well! You're right, a purely comedy story is difficult to create. I tried my hardest, and this was my first pure comedy story.

dungeonguy88

dungeonguy88 #6 · Oct 31st, 2014 · 1 · ·

This is a pretty amusing idea, and I could see a lot of potential for this story to be continued.

Chrysalis' blunt impatience with everyone could be a source of endless comedy.

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #7 · Dec 13th, 2014 · 4 · ·

Too rushed too short. Fun though.

Wasko736

Wasko736 #8 · Dec 30th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Please dude make more chapters for this story - It's awersome!
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please.

Phazon_Corrupted_Unicorn

Phazon_Corrupted_Unicorn #9 · Jul 16th, 2015 · 4 · ·

5376880 I will have to agree. I would love to read more as the week goes on, as well as the aftermath, but please take more time writing each chapter.

DualKitsune