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Midnight Starwriter


Hi my name is Midnight Starwriter. I'm a unicorn and I'm just one of those ponies that enjoys the night. I'll be posting stories of ideas that I get from time to time.

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Fluttershy's life has always been a one normal, until that one day it changes her forever. Ever since that spell that Twilight has cast, and had turned her into a fruit vampire. Her friends tried to save her by reversing the spell just to make her normal again, or so they thought they did. As time goes by, Fluttershy is doom to see her friends passed away through time by immortality. Yet all but one remains from the five of her friends, Twilight Sparkle. The two don't get to see each other much since the last of their good friends passed away. One day, an event has happened to make their friendship end and put Fluttershy in exile and to be hunted down.
Time has when on, and Fluttershy is still living by wondering every end of Equestria from time to time returning to old home.
A whole new generation of ponies in Ponyville as always tell each other stories about a vampire that lives in the Everfree forest and tells them not to go there. In the hopes to keep the younger ponies away from this area.
Seeing that she is this going to have things this way for her only made her depressed and ready to give up on everything.
Will somepony give her a chance and see that she still is the same pony as from before, or they try to kill her for thinking that she is evil. We will follow a young mare that has that choice for her. Only time can tell where will this goes.

A/N: I'm making some time to make this a bit better. Well I hope you enjoy reading this story.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 12 )
Comment posted by RejectedPony deleted Dec 3rd, 2015
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Comment posted by Saltyoven deleted Mar 14th, 2015

This story needs... A LOT of work. I don't mean to be rude but there are many spelling and grammatical errors. I will keep reading this but I hope the errors are fixed.

Ok, been a minute since I last read from you, so I can't give an opinion on skill increase, but, I think you need to practice using your tenses (past, present, and future) in writing. Other than that, it's pretty good. Keep up the good work.

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I've been doing this alone and learning a lot from my past mistakes, since I first started. I would like to thank you for the feed back, so I would know what I am doing wrong here.

I hope this isn't dead.

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I kinda left it at a hiatus for now. I forgot to update it to that. It's been awhile since the last chapter. I have been meaning to get back to this story and I do plan on finishing this story. :twilightblush::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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