kainofthesand
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This is so GOOOOOOOOOOD!
5060582 Isn't first commenting against the rules?
5060629
It most certainly is.
5060649
Must...report...
...waht? Sounds sexy...
I tried to read this... I honestly did. Formatting issues everywhere, though. Please fix the formatting of this story. You've got some paragraphs with indents, some without, some paragraphs that are missing a space in between and an indent.
There's tense shifts everywhere that just yanked me out as well... and I had no idea whether Rose was a flower or a flower with a wet cat... this was such a confusing story...
If rose is a rose, then she has no mouth, she has no sex... she's a flower! If she's a metaphorical flower... try to stick with the metaphor or at the very least don't let it detract from the story. Later on, it seems like she's a pony again. I think. Or a flower with a very, very strange anatomy... do flowers have thighs? Or tails?
Also... lots of grammar issues. Not going to downvote... but geeze.
Foreword is not "forward"...
But srsly. Fix formatting. Would do a lot to make this story more readable... grammar after that.
This has to be some weird metaphor for sex. And my head hurts.
No breezie tag?
I'm not sure what've found, but I like it.
5060650 Report his sorry ass.
5063079
5060649
Reported and now he is banned. A week, hopefully
This was...weird. I thought this was going to be like the story of Zyra, rise of the thorns.
5060629 I got ban and got some good downvotes as wel
>kek
>10/10 would post again
5072032
You're a pseudo troll, you're going to get banned one way or another, especially perma.
5063772 What an asshole. What is his problem?
5074582
Well, he's commenting first an-
She's talking about you, asshat.
Oh. Well, HE STARTED IT!
5074201 kk m8 wanna bet on that?
5074588 What? I was talking about the first post guy....tell you second personality to lay off.
5082627
I'm a filly that lives with him, not a second personality...
This is a great story, hope that it isn't over with that kind of ending. ^^~