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Just a little pony trying to make a small and happy difference in the world.

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**The following is an alternate sequence of events different than those that happened in MLP:FiM, Season 4 Episode 17: Somepony to Watch Over Me. This story breaks away from the canon episode right in the scene where Apple Bloom confronts Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo about her sister's constant babying of her.**

As an alternate avenue of events of Somepony to Watch Over Me, Applejack's babying of her sister goes too far and into an even more babyish territory. Apple Bloom's friends get dragged into it as a result.


Warning: Contains diapers, uses of diapers, and many other elements that others may deem ABDL~ish. Read at your own discretion.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 90 )

This story will most likely be updated whenever I feel the inspiration to continue with the next chapter. A chapter every couple of days or within the week is my projection. I don't intend on rushing things.

I'm very sorry for trying to be serious but this story is hilarious.

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As long as it's entertaining in some way, I don't mind.

Well, I personally think Applejack's justifications pop up very suddenly and without reason. Especially her sudden decision that Apple Bloom and her friends can't even be allowed to use the bathroom because they could get hurt.

I really hope that it turns out that Applejack is being controlled by Discord or something.

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I would have to disagree with you, the sole reason behind all of this is Applejack's overprotective nature that she showed in Somepony To Watch Over Me. Maybe there are other motives behind her actions that haven't been brought up yet. This might get more clear as the story reaches completion.

Regardless, thank you for your honest opinion.

5056845 Still, it feels like the whole "Now you just have to use your diapers because I don't trust you enough to use the bathroom." came out of nowhere. Maybe it would've made more sense if Applejack simply decided that since Apple Bloom and Scootaloo had an accident, they could no longer use the bathroom.

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That sounds, and I don't mean this in a mean way: very cliché.

I've read many diaper-related stories, and they jump to this plot point way too often. It's not a very realistic way of going about it either. A child usually has to have frequently on-going accidents for it even to be considered. By using Applejack's nearly-obsessive repetitive mindstate in which she believes that she has to watch over Applebloom and protect her at all costs, as shown in the episode but with the volume kicked up to almost a 10, I believe I'm using a more realistic way of explaining why Applebloom and her friends are being treated this way.

Comment posted by Glowing Ember deleted Sep 26th, 2014

Promising story so far with great writing. I'm glad someone finally decided to write a diaper story based on this episode, since there hasn't been nearly enough (in my opinion) about it.

Cant wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

What if some spiders or some other insects decide to crawl inside your mouth while you slept?

O_O really, applejack. spiders or insects crawling into their mouths? Did you even hear yourself just then?

an interesting start. i am curious to see where this will go

When I first saw that episode, I thought someone should do an AB/DL themed story about this. Now finally, someone does it. Awesome.

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Thanks for all of the positive feedback, I really appreciate it. I too have been wondering why there aren't enough stories surrounding this episode.

I'll do my best to make sure that the whole story is worth reading. :twilightblush:

Is it just me or did Sweetie Belle act like she actually wanted to be babied and diapered? She was the first to volunteer to be diapered, said that a snack, a massage, and a bedtime story would be "delightful," and didn't complain about the pacifier. Me being a Sweetie Belle lover, I think she'd look adorable dressed like a baby.

This story was super cute. I'd very much like to see a sequel where the three learn that they actually enjoyed the experience and want more.

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I agree with you, Sweetie Belle is absolutely adorable. This story is still marked incomplete though, so it's not over yet.

If you'd like to see images of Sweetie Belle dressed like a baby, I'm sure you could ask an artist to make one as a request. If you'd like to find some artists, you could try derpibooru (search: diaper fetish; filter: everything). Some of my favorite artists are fillyscoots42 and surzb. I'm not sure if they take requests, but you could always look at their deviantart/furaffinity pages and see if they do. If you're not sure, you could also politely ask.

I do want to make it clear though that I'm not quite done with this story yet, there's definitely quite a bit left to happen! Thanks though, I appreciate your comment.

5060911 If I'm mistaken, most artists like getting paid via PayPal for requests. I could be wrong. I'm working on a diaper story featuring Sweetie Belle and Spike. These two make such a cute couple. Both of them have the same eye color and color scheme. Thanks for the recommendations. I'll check 'em out.

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You're welcome, I try to help out anyone I can.

One thing I try to remember, something I made up is:

This world is full of people in dark and scary places and there isn't enough warm sunshine to bring a smile to our faces.

About the art: that's probably true. I've never actually requested art from an artist. I'll be sure to check out your work when it gets posted. This upcoming chapter is currently in the outlining stage, though I'm almost finished with that. After outlining, I usually write from there, filling up as many holes between them. Once it's done, I proofread and look for any possible plot holes. Once I'm really really really really (plus like, a bazillion more really's) ... really sure the chapter is how I want it, I post it and cross my fingers, hoping it's what my audience wants.

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After outlining, I usually write from there, filling up as many holes between them. Once it's done, I proofread and look for any possible plot holes. Once I'm really really really really (plus like, a bazillion more really's) ... really sure the chapter is how I want it, I post it and cross my fingers, hoping it's what my audience wants.

I'm the same way when it comes to my stories. Before, I just made up the story as I went along. Another artist you might like is Oliver-England. You can find his work on DeviantART. I'm planning on asking him if I can use one of his pictures of Sweetie Belle for the cover art for my story "A Mother's Touch."

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Yeah, I do like Oliver England, he has some pretty good stories here too as well (One of my favorites on my user page is The Problem With Being A Foal, and it's written by him.)

I actually started reading your story before I joined, it's pretty nice work. I've never been too keen on Spike in general, but the way you wrote him in a cute way makes it something I still want to read regardless of it having Spike in it at all. If I want to say more I should probably go to your story page and say it, instead of doing so on mine. :twilightblush:

Thanks again.

5064021 No problem. Apparently, the show's writers don't even like him. They're pretty much baffled about what to do with this character. (The "Ice Age sequels are the same way when it comes to Sid and Diego and the other minor characters like Crash and Eddie.) So, they resort to making him the butt monkey, which is severely getting old. Hopefully, there's less of this in the fifth season. I think the reason why I and many others like him so much is because he's so freaking adorable!

sounds like AJ isn't just trying to protect them but also trying to relive her own foalhood.:applejackunsure:

I like the cover art. Apple Bloom's thinking, "This is gonna suck." :rainbowlaugh:

Looks good so far. Let's see what the future chapters will bring :pinkiehappy:

I look forward to the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

This is really how Somepony to Watch over me should have been. :pinkiecrazy:

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Thanks, I appreciate that very much.

good chapter

"Just wait till Rainbow Dash find out you will be in trouble Applejack" :scootangel:

Bloody brilliant! I liked how it turned out and it all seems so i character. If I didn't know any better O would think this came out of an episode.

Yes, Scootaloo, you are correct. Sweetie Belle is totally loving this!

The D'awwws are off the scale!!! This is probably the cutest fanfic I have ever read

nice chapter, I hope Rainbow dash finds out lol

5160703 it's kind of like Ab-Initio, minus Twilight Velvet's insane and twisted desires to mentally regress Twilight and Pinkie.

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it's kind of like Ab-Initio, minus Twilight Velvet's insane and twisted desires to mentally regress Twilight and Pinkie.

The "wat" levles... are off the scale!

This is good, yes, but.... ugh, see comparisons with oen of your works feels os weird... epsecially if the comparison in a field that I didn't feel was all that good!

I have a feeling that Rarity and Rainbow Dash will not approve of what Applejack's doing.

Also this quote:

"My lil' sis is one of the last great gifts that my parents bestowed upon this land, and I can't let her end up like them. She may not be able to grow up like a normal filly if I treat her like this, but at least she'll be safe and still be able to have fun with her friends. I need this fer her as much as she does."

hints that Applejack is aware that what she's doing is wrong and will stunt Apple Bloom's development. I wonder how this will play out later?

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A very clever perception.

I can say that this is a factor later on.

But that's all I'm saying about it. :unsuresweetie:

Great job, Sarah. It was cute, warm and fuzzy, making it one good of a padded pony fic. Rating: 100/10 :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks Trip. :twilightsheepish:

I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of stories you're going to write. :trollestia:

5179647 Writing? Me? Nope. I'll only make a fool of myself. :applejackunsure:

5179647 Don't even think about provoking me with trollestia. :trollestia:

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Provoke provoke provoke :ajsmug:

Maybe in the next chapter, Cheerilee comes over to Sweet Apple Acres to see why Applejack is keeping Apple Bloom home from school, then tells her that Apple Bloom has too go to school according to the law. Applejack continues her protective measures on Apple Bloom, even when she's at school. Meanwhile, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo have been let free and have sworn never to tell anypony about being treated like a baby. But what will they do when their friend is being publicly humiliated by her own sister?

I just think this will make for some good conflict, that's all.

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I definitely see Cheerilee being concerned about them not being in school. These chapters, with this third one, are making up one day. The nap brought them to dinner, and my guess is that this episode did not happen normally on a Tuesday as the canon would suggest. If Applebloom was left home alone, then why wouldn't she just be at school?

My idea, and my approach with this story, is that it happens on a Saturday. Is that a bit of a wild assumption to make? Possibly. I'm looking at this from a weekend perspective, so expect Cheerilee to get a bit involved if we get to Monday. How involved? That's a big question, and you'll see the answer to it when the time comes.

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Now, on a personal note for everyone (Yes, you too,):

The season of warm love in the harsh coldness of winter's upon us. I wish you all a Merry Christmas, and a Happy Holidays. Though, from a glance, it might seem that I've forgotten about this story, I've been holding onto this chapter for the right time to show it. This holiday season is the perfect time, for the message within this third chapter shapes the idea I have for this story, and it's what I feel that our cheesy holiday season is about.

Once again, Merry Christmas, and a Happy Holidays. :heart:

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This month, quite soon.

I hope you're enjoying what I've written so far.

5176984 Yup. The classic "What I'm doing is wrong. I know it's wrong. But I'm doing it (Gonna do it) anyway." mentality. And when you think that way, then you are beyond hope.

It seems that Applejack cannot cope with her own feelings, thusly resorting to use her sister. And, pity that Applebloom didn't use that opportunity for let out her spite.

so... is the story over or something?

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