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"I'm proud of you" These were the words Starburst always wanted to hear from her mother and now on the day of her birthday, she was given a chance to achieve that.

Her friend gave up her own magic for twenty-four hours so that Starburst could spent time with her mother, and make her proud.

Will she succeed though?


Suuuper short fic, this will have only two chapters.

Starburst, Annie, Prism and Candy were created by kilala97

Rated Teen because I can't trust myself to not insert any swearing or some other stuff not suitable for "everyone"

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 10 )

Nice idea for a story. If I were to make a suggestion, I say go more indepth about what is happening. Good luck.

Good premise, but this should definitely be longer than two chapters, there is a lot to discuss here.

Interesting to see how this goes. Lot of potential for a longer story.

And when it comes to MLP: Next Generation stuff, most stories seem to convey that Twilight was disappointed that Star was a pegasus. So it'll double the fun to see this play out.

But I was going to write this! :fluttercry:

Eventually...at some point....in the future....Maybe....

EPP

5052509 Why won't you write it anyway? I am quite sure you'll do a better job.

5054700
Nah it's fine, you got this bro.

EPP

5054748 Thanks bro. /)

My feels are ready for the next chapter :moustache:

WHY THIS CANCELED!?!? IT HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL!!!!

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