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cooliofir135


I'm just some guy with a computer and too much time on my hands.

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Hi, you've reached Octavia, leave a message at the tone~
Ten small words. Never before had ten small words hurt a pony more.

Based on the song "On Hold" By Yourenigma on Youtube/ Bandcamp. Give it a look, it's pretty awesome.

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Comments ( 13 )

Probably one of the more interesting takes on the Vinyl - Octavia breakup stories I've seen. Good work.

Not sure about continuing as anything else will necessitate a large format change -- as in likely converting to actual story. IMO only do if you have a killer idea for a second half. Leaving this sadly ambiguous for now works I think.

Please continue this. I would like to know how this turns out.

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I might write a sequel about Vinyl picking up the pieces, and getting through her life a better mare. Could involve Colgate. Then again, it might not.

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Props to you if you choose to go that route with it. Then again, I'm a fan of unconventional ships like that. Would be nice to see the accustomed Octiscratch used as a springboard to go somewhere different.

This is one hell of a oneshot... Short, but powerful. Good stuff :pinkiecrazy:

I wasn't aloud into the VIP lounge

I think you meant 'allowed'

I don't get it. Why isn't Octavia answering?

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There was originally going to be an ending where Octavia calls back telling Vinyl that she wanted nothing to do with her, and for Vinyl to stop calling all together.

I found it a touch out of place, so I scrapped it.

6151873 But, wasn't Octavia talking to her or something? She sent her a bear. Was Vinyl stalking her? How else would she know about all of her life's adventures?

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I did end up changing a few things.
And it's fiction, so it's romance, not stalking.

i really liked this story and i hope there is a seaqle soon

Okay...

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