Love Me Void

Razalon The Lizardman #1 · Sep 23rd, 2014 · · ·

I am unable to decipher exactly what happened here, but not because the story is badly written, rather, I suck at reading between the lines.

Have a like for that.

lollipopchica

lollipopchica #2 · Sep 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

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This was very poetic. tragic yet no less entertaining. I really dig the symbolism here. Esp the way you intertwined death and marriage. Though it isnt terribly graphic the imagery here was pretty kool. Kudos! I like it i daresay it feels a little gothic. thumbs up, fo sho!

Gypsy

Gypsy #3 · Sep 23rd, 2014 · · ·

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did a double read and, about 99% sure, its about her going from the dungeons to the chopping block.

bridesmaids are the royal guard

dresses are the pony citizens who've come to watch, kinda iffy on the part where she sees her "children", either theyre out in the open undisguised and actually in league with the ponies or still disguised as ponies but arent with Chrysalis as "They jeer the loudest", id have to go with the latter.

The former groom-to-be is Shining Armor who if we take Chrysalis's words for truth,"He did this. He arranged this marriage." arrange for her to be beheaded.
Also iffy where she says " I remember how he lured me to his side, used my hunger against me. He would have had me marry him, and never meet my true love. He… tried to take my love away from me…" From what im getting off this is shes basically gone batshit crazy pretty much. She denies herself being the one who lured and tried to marry. She cannot because if her love for "The Groom". (also just in case you dont understand after she says "I forgive you." Shes right in front of Shining Armor whom punches her in the face shortly after. Reference to how she got to him ---> "Rage ignites me; I tear myself from my bridesmaids’ grip.")

Her groom is obviously death, "Fairest Dress" is Celestia, and the priest is the executioner.

Not bad, but not amazing either.

lollipopchica

lollipopchica #4 · Sep 23rd, 2014 · · ·

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Thx, but I got it the first time round :-).
But you might want to add a spoiler alert to your comment...

klystron2010

klystron2010 #5 · Sep 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

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5043506 Yeah, you pretty much nailed everything. Her children are both in league with the ponies and in disguise ("wearing dresses"), but the ponies have accepted them and know they're there. Also, "the creatures that shared the dark" with her, that she is jealous of, are the rest of the guys on death row.

klystron2010