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Borealium


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Comment posted by 593322 deleted Sep 23rd, 2014

well written if a little pointless,but i gt he feeling that this will turn into clop later on which i approve

5047132 Yup, this story isn't held together by a deep, intellectual plot. It is indeed supposed to be a bit of carefree clop material. :derpytongue2:

Awesome, just awesome. Can't wait to read more :)

5051568 unsure Sweetie emoticon? I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION :flutterrage:

5051620 Cuz I'm not sure why I'm reading a potential clop fic. Nor am I sure why I don't seem to care. Might be hormones, lack of sleep or a lack of normality. Doesn't matter though.

5051654 Ah, much the same as my feelings about writing it. Particularly the lack of normality. In my head.

5051659 I wish you luck on your journey to something in somewhere. Hope you reach your goal, whatever abstract amalgation it may be.

5051666 My goal is to entertain, and to provide enjoyment. If someone somewhere is happy because of something I've written, I'm happy too. :coolphoto:

5051715 Some people will be happy, and some will be, happy.:trixieshiftright:

The cover pic reminds me of a scene in a Nicholas Cage movie… how strange.
"I want that cake!"

-Lightning \[T]/

5051801 lol the cover pic reminds me for some reason ,the little mermaid xD

Whoo...that alone was HOT!! They haven't even gotten to the clop yet, and yet the descriptions and that dressing scene alone was...day'um!! :derpyderp2: Just about jizzed myself...

...I am SO looking forward to future chapters! :twilightsmile:

5054430 I finished writing the second chapter (around 2600 words) yesterday and uploaded it, just waiting for moderation approval. :twilightsheepish:


Edit: didn't publish it! Stupid me <.<

5054458
As far as I know, you don't need mod approval for any chapter except the first.

Unless this is a clop thing...

Comment posted by Borealium deleted Sep 25th, 2014
Comment posted by BlueBlizzard deleted Sep 25th, 2014
Comment posted by Borealium deleted Sep 25th, 2014

5056000 yep, that was me being a noob and forgetting to publish it... :ajbemused:

Short but sweet chapter. That was some great details on Celestia's...hot as fuck lovely figure. Her clothes can't even handle how curvy she is.

i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/632/366/97a.jpg

Oh. She even likes to masturbate while also sucking her own nipple. And now she wants someone to handle all that curves she's got going on.

i.imgur.com/ET5XkXF.gif

Can't wait for the next chapter. Because of the plot. I want to see how Celestia's D-quest goes for the sake of plot.

5057258 The plot is the centre of the universe, and all roads lead back to it. o7

just a quick tip, mr. first time fic writer.

the actual story description ("After a particularly demanding period...") should be the first thing in the description box, while tags ("Contains big butts, hips, thighs and boobs." which you have listed twice, btw) and author comments ("Hello all,...") go after.

G'day all so she wants some d huh look out here comes futaluna:rainbowlaugh:

5059273 I like futa as much as the next guy, but I don't think it'll come into this story. :trollestia:

This really needs pictures, animated pictures of this Goddess doing her exercises....

5075043 now there's an idea.

See Fig. 7 - squat

I'm loving every min of this. Now I can't wait to see twilights turn with her mentor, if that will happen next

All of the fetishes. Yes. All of my yes.

Big curvy giggly mares are exceptionally attractive already. And now they squirt?! *Faints with a boner the size of Excalibur* I will be watching the fuck out of this! Fantastic work, friend!

I just realized this story was tagged Human even with the cover art, but eh, whatever. Still was an awesome clop. Always been into curvier girls, and still will for some time. :raritywink:

5165417 yeah, i just really like badgerben's style but he doesn't do human art :trixieshiftright:

That definitely. Does not hapin evry day
:ajsmug:
Asome fic though i hope to see more.:rainbowkiss:

I love it. I hope she'll get someone with a fat cock soon.

Extremely well done. I was either laughing or trying to figure out the why.
This will explain...

All credit to TFS (TeamFourStar) for the clip and Hellsing ultimate abridged.


As a request....please do a luna one too?

please continue this story

5327688 Does there need to be a why? :P

I recently had an operation and my writing spirit has been a little jarred but I'll carry on soon.

5328862
actually there does. i'm a luna fan. not a big fan of celestia, though. but this...this is a great story and I can appreciate that. I hope you get well soon.

5330601 Well, thank you for the kind words. I can write in a Luna chapter to this story, I did slot in a certain potion to the first chapter which has certain body-changing properties... perhaps a touch of princest? Some people love it, other people not so much.

5333444
I happen to like princest. But seriously, this is a great story. Keep up the great work. :yay:

5335920 Thank you! I'll make an effort to get Luna in at some point, next chapter will be Twilight.

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