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What happens when someone who doesn't like My Little Pony ends up in their universe and is stuck there? Basically, a lot of freaking out, swearing, and irresponsible things... Who would have guessed?!



Rated Teen for language and sexual themes. Also for Brony Hater language.

I do NOT agree with any of the language references. They are all used in a fictional sense and do NOT portray any mindset of my own.

Also, if anyone has a better cover image... please share! ^^;;

Chapters (15)
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Comments ( 750 )

LOL, it's all dramatic and stuff, and then
"So cliché…"
:rainbowlaugh:

I have actually been waiting for this type of story. I'll be watching it as long as ya don't mind my two cents.

Heh, they're in for a surprise. :trollestia:

Aru

Hmm...reminds me of Dan vs FIM. I'll try to read it later ;)

735554
o_o IT DOES! Shame DvFiM got cancelled.

interesting HiE concept. I think I'm going to give it a shot (after college this week)

Aru

735558 Cancelled? Few days ago author upload a vid on youtube so don't lose hope :rainbowkiss:

Edit:One chapter readed. Looks nice ;) Rest, after school.

When I first read this I only thought Francis got transported into Equestria...
images.wikia.com/left4dead/images/d/d2/Left_4_Dead_Francis_Hates_by_MysticalNomad_-_Copy.jpg

Nice premise!
I've never read anything with quite this take on HiE, I'm looking forward to how your characters handle things.

Can't wait for the next chapter!:pinkiehappy:

Aru

Ha, finally done with chapter 2 ^^ And i need to say it, this is going to be buckin great! :rainbowkiss: Haters stuck in Eq with they friend who is a closet Brony.... Horror, the horror! :rainbowlaugh:

736165 Why do I have this strange feeling that we are connected. Almost every story I read, I see you commenting. Something really fishy is going on here.:rainbowderp:

Teenagers.....amirite?
They're like little angels:scootangel:

bbaaaahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, another story I must wait for mmmammaaaaaooooorrrrrr :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

Frack! I hate it when i miss all the comments... But THERE ARE SO MANY! :pinkiegasp: I shall try to answer them...

735547

Cliche, yes. Surprises, oh... there will be many! :trixieshiftleft:

735551

Lol two cents only makes me richer! :rainbowwild:

735554

Omfg i TOTALLY forgot about that... :rainbowlaugh:

But no, this is actually based on a few times with me and my own friends... Yeah, sad, innit it? :unsuresweetie:

735560

Ahhhh college... Poison to my mind~ :pinkiecrazy:

735658

...I have no clue how to respond to that... :twistnerd:

735822

No, just dapper~ :moustache:

736078

Lol oh, as do i... as do i... :trollestia:

736165

MAYBE MAYBE MAYBE! :derpytongue2:

736706

WITH MORE HORROR! Oh celestia, i am tired... :facehoof:

737638

Yes, angels with devil's horns~ :scootangel:

737923

NOW I MUST WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER DO TO YOUR LONG COMMENT! HUZZAH! :trollestia:

738282
Then I have completed my job. MASS CONFUSION AWAY!!!!

Aru

738282 Sad if things go wrong with you friends. If they not accepted you as a brony they are not you real friends. Really... who can "hate" or dislike someone because of show/movie/book? I now a girl who like "Twilight"(You now, sparkling "vampire" and shit...blargh :rainbowwild:) but she likes "Witcher"(books not a game) so... everybody like diffrent things sometimes in really weird combinations. Like me. I like to watch a mature, serious (or just bloody, Hellsing :pinkiehappy:) anime or read books/manga/comic for adult thanks to topics but i love some colorful, freaky ponies who live in great world with no rapes, theft, wars or murder happening every day. We all know that Equestria is not too safe world thanks to animals and monsters but... it's better place even with no magic and shit. So... i can be a big fanboy of "Berserk" and "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic"- this is really freaky combination... i wonder when Guts and gang fall from skies and end up in Equestria !
media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m08817qofa1qgppkx.gif <<< My reaction to Guts in Equestria.

Sooo...that's all. Sorry for my poor English :facehoof:
And go on with writing! Next chapter incoming!

738282 Actually it is not too bad. Especially philosophy of mind is very ... enlightening:twilightsmile:

ZOMGWTFBBQ!!!1!!1
again. Shit just hit the fan.

This...this is simply brilliant. Plenty of people have put humans who like the show in Equestria, but I'm sure you're the first to put haters in the show. Pure genius. I can't wait to see where this goes.

A slightly entertaining HiE story that isnt just a pointless self insert?
Ok maybe it is. But still.

MADNESS! MADNESS I SAY!
I must Fav!

Pure awesome! :pinkiehappy:

CLIFF HANGER WHY? I am going to cry. MOAR or I may die( I have story cancer and the only cure is moar.)

>Brony hater.
>Says "For the love of Celestia!"
Thismakestotalsense.jpeg

Haters are gonna hate, Trollers are gonna troll, but Bronies are gonna BROHOOF! :rainbowdetermined2:

This is exactly as good as I expected. The text is a little bit dense though. A bit of extra spacing would do some good for the readability.

The dr said I require MOAR of your story. Plz fill the prescription :raritywink:

739572 i think i saw that comment in 2 stories now :pinkiecrazy:

740147 Well thats me. The 'ZOMGWTFBBQ!!!!1!!' guy. I say that when shit gets real.

740161 Well then, SHIT. JUST. GOT. REAL. :pinkiesmile:

Anti-bronies with a brony inside Equestria, nice. I wasn't too sure when I started reading but this is really interesting. I'm suprised no one else has thought of this

740191 You kinda get those thoughts anyways so nobody thought it would be THIS GOOD :pinkiecrazy:

740212

That's why the rating bar was made, to promote stories and get them on the featured bar. I actually found this while going through an authors fav list

740233 That is the best non-fiction i've ever heard. :pinkiesad2:

740332 This deserves a purple word cause its awesome. Yay. :yay:

Sorry but We Psycho Antibrony To Kill pony Just Prove HE HATE THEY GUTS BY RIPING THE GUTS

Aru

:yay: -----> nothing more to say.

>> Insane ARE YOU INSANE?!:trollestia:

I love HiE fics about closet bronies. So... Fav.

Somepony call a medic! Or a vet! :facehoof:

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