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ZuTheSkunk


I mostly draw as a hobby and only on very rare occasions do I write anything.

Comments ( 222 )

Well... This was awkward as fuck...

Very well written. And that last line had me in stitches. XD

Haaah. That ending. Priceless! This was well done and a fun read. Great job.

Lost my shit at the end, but then continued to do so when Spike was like, "So um....continue please?"

...in the words of Spike, Continue please. I mean, not for nothing, but it's rude to leave a Dragon hanging like that, more over, I'm willing to bet Twi needs some seeing to. And besides, in this case, I think it'd be better and safer for the two of them to explore this. If nothing else, I think the bond the two of them share would be strong and robust enough to survive possible fallout...and who knows? maybe not romantic, but intimate relationship between those two would be a good thing.

Awesome cover art. Really drew me in. Kinda surprised the mods let it through, though.

*sees complete tag*
:raritydespair: Nuu, my bon-ehrm... Spike's boner needs to see the what happens next, because if you didn't write it it didn't happen...
(actually, I find it brilliant to end it on that particular moment, have an upvote)

And then, she got an idea.
An awful idea.
She got a wonderful, AWFUL idea.

:pinkiecrazy:

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if the mods ask, that's his tail, ok?

That ending :rainbowlaugh:

And then, she got an idea.
An awful idea.
She got a wonderful, AWFUL idea.

Well, that's an old reference.

Anyways, I thought this was a well written fic. The ending was chuckle worthy. :pinkiesmile:

LOL That was quite an ending! You don't often see many cliff-hangery endings like that anymore!

Very well written, well-imagined, and well done!!

...Okay, I admit it. I laughed.

That's it? Fuck... :twilightangry2:

So...um continue please?

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"Twilight!" Spike shouted. "You made my tail pop out!"

Sorry had to, couldn't miss that opportunity.:rainbowlaugh:

At first I was like... yeah you know I usually don't read Spike and clop and stuff....:twilightangry2:

Then I read the comments cause my stupid interest in it didn't die down... :flutterrage:

Then I read it.... :rainbowhuh:

And fell off my chair laughing my ass off :rainbowlaugh:

I like it, it's something kinda different. It's well written and overall just a very good piece. Thank you for writing it. :yay:

Truly a dragon's dragon of a response, Spike. Those bullies from your native lands would be giving you the thumbs-up right now.

Huzzah, little dragon. Huzzah, I say!

As we are want to say here in The Madhouse;

Spike looked at her again. Then at his penis. Then back at her. Then back at his penis. Then back at her.
He bit his lip and slowly scratched his head.
"So... um...", he started. He then shrugged. "Continue, please?"

normaly i don´t like that, but i was somehow funny, because i didn´expected that:pinkiehappy:

:twilightblush: This never happened and let's never speak of it again.

:moustache: Fine by me.

I enjoyed this far more than I though I would. I think I enjoyed the characterizations the most, good stuff. It'd be awesome to see this continued.

*Finishes reading*
*Starts to scroll down to the comments*
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:rainbowlaugh:

Like a Boss, Spike.

Most excellent.

There's just so many thing that are wrong with this...
but I can't bring myself to care right now

that ending was like... :pinkiegasp:
and then... :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

And then, she got an idea.

An awful idea.

She got a wonderful, AWFUL idea.

Someone needs to draw Twilight doing the Grinch smile.

I demand AN EPILOGUE

I wanted to thank everyone for the overwhelming positive response. I didn't even think it would receive this much attention! Once again, thank you so very much! :pinkiehappy:

As for continuing... well, the thing is, I didn't really think what to do next after getting to that part at the end; I was just going for reaching it, and after I was done, I went "eh, good enough". While I had a more or less good idea for the sequence of events you see in the story, I'm not quite sure what should be happening afterwards (besides "sex happens"). I might try to come up with something in the future, but I don't make promises... :twilightblush:

Also,

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I genuinely lol'd. :rainbowlaugh:

5037783i second that

UUUUUNNNNFFFFF. Fucking byotiful!

You should have continued it to the orgasm. Wait... did I just say that?

:flutterrage:Moar...good so far upvote

I wonder what happened after the ending. Did she stop? Did they just awkward stare at each other?
I hate it when a fic ends like this :applejackunsure:

Other than that, I liked this clopfic.

I bet Spike is feeling lucky for actually scoring in reality after this incident, even if it was with the wrong mare:rainbowlaugh:

yeah continue please

This ending.
Epic-
I just- WOW! xD

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Is that.... Dr. Seuss?
:rainbowlaugh:

:moustache: Twilight... What's that smell?

:twilightsheepish: Shame Spike... That's the smell of shame...

:moustache: ... ... ... I feel strangely attracted to the smell of shame...

And the very next day Spike got all the Ice Cream he could eat and later his own room.

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