Before Twilight and the return of both Princess Luna and the elements of harmony there was just Princess Celestia and her niece Cadence, when a changeling spy approaches the princess speaking of an upcoming attack on Canterlot she has no choice but to plan a defence, but her royal guard aren't trained to fight off Changelings, in fact Equestria hadn't seen changelings for over a hundred years.
The princess decides that now is the time to unleash her secret weapon, eight hired mercenaries that she had collected from around the know lands of Equestria and beyond, plus the new changeling Spy. Hopefully they won't fail in their first real mission.
((This is pretty much what would happen if the tf2 mercs were born in the mlp universe, so things are probably going to be a little different about them, you have been warned. Takes place a few years before the return of Nightmare Moon))
((This story is not related to my other tf2 x mlp crossovers, it's just an idea that I had))
Decent, I see some potential in this. Have my up vote and a favorite.
This is interesting, I agree with big boss man.
Although spelling and grammatical errors are present.
Otherwise, the story is good for pacing, though you should probably include a prologue that gives more detail to what happened before hand
5412296 I had the plan to have the characters explain things more in second chapter, if what happened before hand is still unclear I will add a prologue, but thanks for the advise, I should probably take another look over for the errors.
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Glad to be of help.
will wait on the next chapter.
Medic pony is best pony merc. I do beg of you dont make scunt the center merc plz.
5412746 Don't worry, Medics my fave too
5412754 Thank GabeN most cross over fics i read of tf2 its always scunt, good to see the best class get some love.
yes,....i like this fic.
Shit. The Heavy is dirty. THE HEAVY IS DIRTY!!!!
A great story and I hope to read more of it! You seem to realley get the team dynamic down and you have everything balanced well. Keep up the good work!
I love the 'bromance' between Medic and Heavy you are implying. I also like how well you are writing the characters and what Equestrian creatures you chose them to be. I can't wait for more.
Kinda saw it coming when the Heavy fucked up his backstory.
God this story is amazing. MOAR
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5427995 a spy?
yup heavy is a spy
If Heavy is a spy, where's the REAL Heavy?
I’ve actually ised that phrase before
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He dead