[ A bit of a side thing I have been working on. I joined a rp group and this was what i made for the char i made. A male Luna/ Nightmaremoon. And a little tale of his History as found in a journal he wrote.
Nothing massive but fans of SiS will reconize a few similarities, but at the same time this gives away nothing of How SiS will end hehe.
Enjoy what started as a small back story that wound up being a little bigger than I wanted.
Amusing enough. It's well worded and well spaced. Keep up the nice work.
A NEW "THE DARK RABBIT" STORY? instaFav. doesn't follow too closely to the story of SiS:TfCG, but this is an alternate universe version of what may very well be an alternate universe.
Pros: Nice take on Rule 63'd MLPFIM, wonder who this "teacher" is, and what a twist!
Cons: Syntax got a bit awkward later on in the story.
Evaluation: Thumbs up
This was only going to be a short one I'll touch on it again at some point.