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A Mysterious Pony


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One Shot reviews has read and graded.
This story was a complete mess. I lost my way in the first few sentances. The plot is well thought of but poorly displayed. In most cases it was hard to figure out who was saying what. Scenery discription was amateur and rarely given. This is not the authors first fiction and has simply dropped the ball on this one. We suggest getting proof readers to scan your work before posting.

Overall score: 49%
NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

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5007448 Sheesh! Oh, my gosh! Calm down! This story was just to help me get out of my writer's block; just to, you know, like, just write out whatever came out of my head. I knew it wasn't good, but I don't think it's the worst thing you'll ever read. Don't take it that seriously, people! I'll write it in the Author's Comments section, if you'd like! :fluttercry: :fluttershysad:

5007448 I meant Author's Notes. Sorry. :twilightsheepish:

5007628 Only trying to be proffesinal :ajsmug:
no hard feelings? :twilightblush:
If you edit the story we'll gladly regrade it :raritywink:

5008074 Water under the bridge! I'm the same way; correcting everybody who says things wrong or has bad grammar when they talk. By the way, you spelled professional wrong, no offense. :twilightsheepish:

5008720 haha now we're even then :rainbowwild:
Thanks for understanding.

5011562 Now, that I thought about it, I think I'm going to change the story and the tags.

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