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Zeg


>_> ... Well, look at that.

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After a run in with a spell gone wrong that involved Twilight Sparkle, vampire fruit bats, a lot of staring, and then resulted in an unfortunate apple massacre, Fluttershy thought her life had returned to normal after Twilight successfully removed the spell’s effects.

That was until she started waking up in the middle of the night with the odd cravings for apples.

What started as just mild attacks of the midnight munchies soon became frequent late night excursions to the Apple family orchards, with only hazy memories and the lingering taste of apples left when Fluttershy awoke to find herself near or sometimes even in the branches of an apple tree.

Unless she can find a way to control the unwelcome urge to gorge herself on the ripe, red fruits, one of her best kept secrets is bound to be discovered.


PaulAsaran was kind enough to do a review for my story.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 58 )

I have loved your other stories. I have to check this out.

Fluttershy closed her eyes and nodded. “I’m... half threshal.” :fluttercry:

Suddenly, faved. :moustache:

Hmmm.. not sure what threshhal is but not a bad story...

Zeg

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It's a sub species name for the bat ponies, though it isn't anything that's official. I've seen it used a few times in other fan fiction, and I like the sound of it more than just saying 'bat pony'.

5065002 Oh; I'm ok with that.. I never read any of those fanfics so I didn't know about it and it makes sense that the batponys would have their own name too.. earth, pegi, unilcorn, alicorn and now Theshhal.. thank you for the info.. It's always good to see what other stories have a common thread.. Even if is fan made name I now can consider it to be it's own canon..

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*Nocturne.
I've also seen Moori.
They're both better fits than thestral.

This is a thestral.

5065002 I think you mean "Thestral" not "Threshal."

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Those are creepy as hell. In an awesome way.

Zeg

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Hm, I could have sworn I read it somewhere spelled the other way (and a google search for 'mlp threshal' took me to the mlp wiki page for Royal Guards, which is why I thought I had it right), but I think you're right, I've got the spelling wrong. :derpytongue2:

Ah well, easy enough to fix that.

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That's like... nightmare level stuff there.

Well this looks awesome. I want more.

5065519 Nocturne and Moori; hmm..Yeah after thinking about it I got admit those are better fits and when I looked at that pic they fitted even more.. Nocturne is obvious ref to their nightly duties and perhaps their night lifestyle but Moori was a bit of puzzle,,, Not that it wasn't a good word to describe them but found no real connection other than it looks like the word Moon..

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It's from a "Rainbow Dash is a changeling" story.

5085319 Ok! Thanks for the clear up... Always helps when I know what other writers are writing about.. It's one of things that always inspire me..

On a completely ridiculous notion, I know of ONE STALLION WHO CAN HELP! Now, somepony go fetch the ponified version of Vincent Price! NOW!:flutterrage:

Comment posted by mehperson deleted Oct 5th, 2014

How is it that your stories keep falling under the radar. No one sees them for some reason. you need to get some exposure.

Zeg

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Lots of stories get approved every day, easy to miss new ones.

Could be timing too. This one I've been updating on Saturdays, which I don't know if that is better or not for getting noticed.

Yay! An update! not sure how I missed it being posted but I see you really took in account FS's craving apples vs the vampire desire/need for blood... And the reactions are what one would expect....Both of which most writers tend to overlook in these vampony stories.. Keep up the good work!!! Now the only questions is how soon the others will find out and will they accept it?... And What it will mean for poor Fluttershy..:yay:

I actually enjoyed it, and it is hard to impress me or to make me find an interest in something, but in this very chapter, the way Rainbow and Fluttershy acted under the circumstances seemed more than what it seems. I suspected a love between them, but still best-friend love.

Earned a fave and a like from me! Pretty good story.

I honestly want to see a sequel one shot.

Fluttershy silently tanked Twilight for the momentary distraction.

Should be thanked.

hot on Fluttershy’s heals

I think you meant heels not heals
also, the next sentence: "chaise" should be chase
...and the same thing in the next sentence after that: chaise should be chase

Now I need to see what happens come nightmare night :rainbowlaugh:

pretty good chapter but makes me wonder how the others would react and if they could be so willing... In any case it was pretty good for a vampony story about Fluttershy..

This was a nice, adorable story. Goes very well with Fluttershy's personality and actions. The way it read out it could have been an episode during... what season would it fit 3 or 4, maybe 2. Either way, nice slice of life story.

Zeg

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This one happens a short time after what happens in season 4, episode 7, "Bats!".

It never made sense to me that Twilight's spell randomly made Fluttershy physically change into part bat, so this story was partially me just coming up with something that I felt like was a better reason for what happened. That, and I thought it would be interesting to tell a story about how our cutsie little timid pegasus deals with the vampony thing.

Glad you liked it.

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Was more referring to the tone of the story and which season tone fit it best. Didn't know what episode that was honestly though myself so thanks for telling me which one. Gotta see episodes again.

She quickly trotted over to the blanket, which happened to have two ponies and an entire picnic spread sitting on it, but that wasn’t really important right now.

Oh Dashie. :rainbowkiss:

This is a really great story. I'm surprised it's eluded me for as long as it has. Usually I'll jump right on any flutterbat stuff.

This was really good! Well done! It's really hard to find such good Flutterbat stories.

This is a nice little story. I find myself hoping for a sequel.

“You know, you totally gotta go vampony for Nightmare Night. It’d be perfect.”

It is canon now!!

:pinkiegasp::yay:

I could not help but fell this chapter was supporting a Flutterdash shipping

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Perhaps you'd enjoy my first FlutterBast story, which also gives a little FluttterDash.

Fluttershy drew her forehooves up to cover her chest. Her mouth hung open, her voice frozen in her throat from the horror she had just heard. She shuffled backwards a step, shaking her head feverishly as she finally managed to say, “W-why would you even ask that‽ That would kill anypony!”

As a guy with an OC named Interrobang, I am pleased at your use of it.

Zeg

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You could say that. She definitely...

... tasted the Rainbow.
:rainbowdetermined2:

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Hehe, I was so focused on the Homestuck reference I forgot the obvious Skittles reference.

Which is weird because my slang term for pony is skittles donkey, you would think I'd remember Skittles.

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I make a point to use interrobangs in any instance that actually would benefit from one.

It is my unrealistic hope that the more people get used to seeing them, the more common they will become, and we can finally have both dramatic questions and technical grammatical accuracy without the average reader getting confused.

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I always just assumed that Fluttershy had thestral lineage. I mean, how else would that sort of magic affect her so much? It was just the craving for apples that Twilight bestowed on her, not necessarily bat wings or fangs.

You know what would be the best suggestion, Twilight?

Telling her to talk with her mother about it. She would know about vampirism a lot more than you would...

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