One thing I love about being a brony is how great this fandom is and I feel that I need to thank my bronies for being so awsome so I'm here to give you the best quality fics I can create. Enjoy!
I know it wasn't the best choice I've made. I know that she'll never forgive me. He seemed so excited and I guess that eagerness got the better of me too. I should have expected a response but I could never have foreseen what would happen. R.I.P Captain Finger... I'm sorry
A one-shot, inspired by this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5OE8OJCRgCQ#
(Note: the 'other' character tag represents the human- just to be clear)
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Sentence is too long.
"Barer of the Element" should be "bearer".
"Sargent" should be "Sergeant".
There are more errors, but I don't remember where they are.
This story was the most random, weirdest, most pointless HiE story I've ever read. But at least for a Brony in Equestria story it wasn't cliche.
Overall: 1549/2563
*First*
Needs editing but
Nikolai Gogol
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*hastily edits story* Errors? What errors? My story is magnificent! You speak of matters you know nothing about, mortal! Be gone with you!
Seriously though, thanks for pointing those out - note to self: Pre-read story before posting for whole world to see
As for the 'random, weird and pointless' aspect that was kinda the whole point so I'm glad you think so!
That's a pretty decent score, considering this is only my second story. Thanks!
and congrats on first comment.
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That's funny. The last person who saw I had written *first* told me only douchebags say that.
5007872 Nikolai Gogol wrote the sci-fi story The Nose.
Thought it was related to this story
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Well I don't think you're a douchebag
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I've never even heard of the story, let alone the author (sorry to disappoint). This was purely inspired by the video linked in the description
Captain Finger!! Noooooooo!!
Srsly tho that was a funny and entertaining story.
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Thanks a lot, glad to know I can be entertaining to someone