• Member Since 20th Apr, 2012
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iceypheonix


I don't know I just felt like writing

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Meet Inkwell he is a normal Pegasus who tries to date his friend Spitfire but when this turns out to have ruined his life can he try to put it back together. This is my first fanfic so please give me constructive criticism and I am sorry if it was not good.

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Comments ( 2 )

Pretty good for a first fic. although you need to improve your grammar. Other than that well done!:twilightsmile:

Here is a tip, comma's are your friends. Other than the few grammar mistakes it was a well made story, I look forward to your next one.

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