• Member Since 23rd Jan, 2012
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Camlio


Just a fan of fun stories, looking to enjoy them, and when I can finally grab enough time for myself write them once more!

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I like the idea but I felt as if alot of info was dumped on me. Some being more or less not needed.

You know what's funny is that I'm also writing one of these. asked frieza and everything. So when I saw yours, I had to see what others wrote. anyway, keep it coming.

Quick question. Is this canon in the Vogonverse?

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4989008 Well I got the approval from Frieza so yeah. It's supposed to be canon, lots of stuff is different than the other stories for one simple reason.

The location, things are named differently people act differently and I'm hoping to set the stage for others who set their stories in the Jolly old U.K. maybe even having a time when Frieza's stories cross over the pond.

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It is cannon for the Vogonverse, and I do like the setting. I may set one later across the pond.

Comment posted by Lil E Vanguard fighter deleted Sep 14th, 2014

Uh-oh, I don't like that bit of foreshadowing at the end... Other than that, like the story idea!

So, the mom's a FIM fan? What's going on!? Why is that guy doing this!?

That Jeffery guy was a total psycho! How did Cedric do that!?

5010313 Well both of those will be explained later on but, let's just say that there's a reason that the ponies are able to influence the world as they do in various stories.

Also... that rumor about people vanishing? There's a reason he was willing to kill someone for money.

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I was wondering about that, like how Celestia was able to access her telekinesis (albeit with some effort), and how the Apples seem to have retained their Earth pony nature connection and the boost in crop production it provides. I wonder if the pegasi can fly? So, someone put Jeffery up to it? Still, he was pretty psycho. BTW, any more updates planned for today?

5010330 Well I'm not gonna be able to update often till after I move at the end of the week but, when I do I'll be updating semi regularly.

And I can't reveal the answer to the pegasi thing unless Our Lord Frieza gives the okay for it. But, I can say one thing... there's a reason why Twilight Sparkle is the Vogon Pony for this one.

5010355 Yeah it's a no for any more updates tonight... it's currently 5:30 in the morning after all and I need my sleep

Oh my Faust, WE HAVE A COUPLE OF BADASSES PYROMANCERS OVER HERE!!!!

pretty interesting start for the story, though it would have more since if the parents died after Twilight arrived but non the less its a good read, and I shall be awaiting the next chapter; keep up the good work and please update soon :twilightsmile:

For some reason I was reminded of naruto when Cedric went into psycho mode

5025081 Actually the scene where Cedric went insane was based on an MLP reenactment video where someone had drawn Spike in one of the scenes where Naruto uses Nine Tail's powers the first time... I think it was the one where he's losing it and fighting the mist ninjas and Sasuke had been critically injured?

keep up the good work

I hope Cedric and Stephanie can recover soon with Twilight's help, they seem to really need someone right now. I'm think Twilight will wish she didn't know what happened to the kid's birth parents when she finds out. Hopefully Pinkie can help cheer them up when they go to her wedding! About how far along is Pinkie at this point if Twilight can see it? I can see the kids have Twilight wrapped around their fingers, at least in regards to dinner choices!

5025433 If you wanna know more about Pinkie you should see the story that started the world this story takes place in known as I See Pink.

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I've read it, I was just curious if you knew.

5026807 I have been sworn to secrecy in order to maintain my authorization to write in the Vogonverse.

That and all the time skips in I See Pink kinda messed with my time perception.

I knew Jeffrey was the assassin that was going to kill the parents. That's why the virtual stallion was so insistent are legalizing everything. Damn, I wish I was wrong.

I'm glad Twilight was right there for the children. However, how was she 'born' so quick? I thought it was going to take three months? And how was Pinkie able to hug Barb, if Barb is a Help-mate without a shell? Never mind that last question, we're talking about Pinkie Pie here. I still want an answer to the first two though.

5121052 hard-light holograms, i use them all the time in my lab and armory, hard targets are always better than just projections

5155986 you can make light literally turn solid, it's extremely difficult without the proper tech, however.

5026813 aww.... I sincerely hope this story didn't die...

5026813 please... is this story not dead?

hmm me thinks the story is dead to bad i liked it to

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It's not dead... Well not intentionally just I don't have a stable internet connection Or my laptop anymore to write with.

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aw okay tthen still a new chapter would be nice

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Well I would if I could

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i would say take your time but 3 years is a long time

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Well would you be able to write while homeless? I've only just been able to have my own place again

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maybe not but then again i dont know what its like in your shoes

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They never really stated WHEN they were going for the family vacation just that they were planning one so we have no timeframe for the events, so for all we know it could have been a whole year or just a few months before the family trip. Also, the whole bit where a rep came to finalize the request for twilight falls into this as well since the author never stated when each event took place. Though my question is...... Where in the nine hells did that boy go to so he could have friggin draconic abilities!? He's a human right? Finally, great start, hope to see the next chapter and as for my bet? Press gets to see alicorn in angry momma mode cause they scare the boy

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