East Zephyr, a lost Breezy left behind when he was separated from his comrades, is rescued one night by a sweet and gentle, but strange, mare. As he adjusts to his new life with her, he learns that she's not exactly what she seems.
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The last one was mostly fetish stuff. It was primarily a vore story, and little else.
This one, however, is going to be more gentle oriented. It will have a happy ending for the Breezy and his mysterious savior, so don't worry. If the "Trap" in the title is what has you worried, don't get too worked up about it. That's just a subtle hint towards something about the mare.
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No, it's... something else. It's nothing bad, I assure you. You'll just have to wait to find out.
Not a bad start to a story, but it really needs an editing clean up. There are too many errors to put in one comment. Do you have a Gdoc of this somewhere?
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I may as well do it here then. Gdocs is just beautiful for getting help with writing. I'll leave this on my read later so I remember to come back and point out things.
Seems interesting can't wait for more
So when is the next chapter
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I'll get it done at some point. I've been dealing with a lot of IRL stuff recently, so I haven't had much to time to write.
Sad it's on hiatus, the cover pic is darn cute =P
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Yeah, I'm not sure if I'll ever get around to continuing it, sadly. I might just try a one-shot with the same character at some point, though.
Just read this story, three years later from the start. I didn't see it was only one chapter. This is alot to ask for from three years on hold but will you be making any more chapters?