Wind Breeze and River have their newest sibling, Angel Song, and are given the responsibility of watching over their little sister for one night. Something goes horribly wrong when they leave the house to go to the park. What will happen when Rainbow and Soarin find out about this?
( Sorry I didn't fix this problem sooner I didn't know the moderator could undelete story's)
This is so awesome!!!!! Wind is like his mother and river is like her father. I like both but the baby sounds adorable looking. I can't wait for the next chapter. I also am trying to write a story about my favorite villians.
The suspense begins!!!
5062654 dont spoil the surprise
5065755
Do you mean my avatar pic of Vinyl Scratch? Sorry it's not Halloween yet.
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Never read it. I've been busy with this site and other stuff.
5065709 ok
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I'll look into it.
imma not gonna lie.....THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!
5068933 OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I CANT WAIT....and why am i so obsessive over a story god i have issues and usually i am like god reading ....yay but now im like OMG NEW CHAPTER
5069394 *slow clapping* well if you want me to explode with anger that is was supposed to be out yesterday or happiness that its coming out soon, so ill say that again happiness or anger
Whens the next chapter coming out....because one i am have no patients and two I got some suspense issues
O_O.....well that was an unsuspecting turn of events.......
....................... that escalated quickly.
5078792 you have a point, but i would keep putting occasional chapters like that but hint, not gore to kids cause that could well..end up to be like child abuse or something like that...
5088265 and then Shadow came to them asking to get revenge on Rainbows dad and he offered the a chance to get back at Rainbow. Brilliant.
5088239 on the bright side.... yay more gore on the other side Aww i'm inpatient!
5092449 k then, im cool with that (omg i can just imagine my self saying a wan it now Applebloom style) also speaking of uploading a chapter i think i might get my first one out soon as well!