In the world of Equestria, there is the living, and there is the unliving.
"Ghosts" have been wandering the outskirts of major Equestrian cities for a long, long time, and for a long long time the Royal Equestrian Guard have been fighting off raids against the Ghosts from them taking small towns like Whinnypeg to huge metropolises like Ponyville. The war never ends, and the Guard is always recruiting.
But when a young injured stallion falls into captivity of the Ghosts, he will need to fight his way back out of their lair and back to his home with tooth and hoof.
Or maybe it won't be as hard as it all seems.
Not too much is known about Ghosts.
Maybe he will be the leader in undead relations.
One thing's for certain: He will never see the world, or Ghosts, the same ever again.
The cover image does not accurately portray the characters in this story.
Good golly that cover... Say, do you think you can help me out with ERRA? I just slap-dashed the badge together.
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Oh god dude, the cover image isn't even mine. I didn't make it.
I could try to make something.
Good story. I liked everything from the grammatical correctness to the back story line. Interesting pony world with malicious ghosts. Also enjoyed Soul Dews little stutter she gets when she says and sometimes. Please continue with this!
Meh. I couldn't find this interesting enough to upvote and that isn't a good reason for leaving a downvote.
4986486 Is there going to be a sequel? This is really good...
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I will make a sequel of this if the story garners a lot of likes. I would like about 50 or so. Otherwise, no.
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May I ask what was wrong with my story?
Argh! Cliffhanger! Please make a sequel. I can't stand cliffhangers.
I thought when I saw the name soul dew, that this was a crossover story because in Pokémon, there's an item called the soul dew. It contains the spirit of Latios in the movie and raises special attack in the video game. But once you said dream, I knew it wasn't. Either way, I must say great job on the story! I will give you a thumbs up!
Ah, a story inspired by a dream. Those are always interesting. You also seem to have a vivid imagination like I do...sweet!
Your story was well written and certainly easy to imagine, but I can't help but feel there needs to be more to it. It needs more backstory to explain why the Ghosts are such enemies to the equines. But maybe I just need to read the story again.
It would be awesome if you made a sequel because I think the idea needs more exploration. Ghosts have always been fascinating to me.
~HiRi
4987377 I just found it boring.
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Sounds fine to me. Thank you for your input.
4987342 i like it though i don't think you need a sequel just continue this story.
This NEEDS a sequel. It's too GOOD not to have one, and too vague to leave like that. I rarely comment (if ever) for more to a story, so that coming from me?
Well done, ol'e chap!