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the ponies... thry tell me things... buetiful things...
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What... the actual Hell?
Eh, good enough to read the next chapter.
4966669 I have..... no..... bucking...... idea.......
what kind a transformation is this?!
Errrm. Sure. You do know its impossible to escape from a buried coffin, If you did manage to break the lid the several tons of dirt would crush you.
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It's possible. You have to kick it in the middle, where it can support the least weight, then get your head and arms (or forelegs, in this case) out first and dig for dear life.
4967190 No its not possible because if you did up you bring dirt onto your self and end up burying your self.
4967193 Mythbusters proved it's possible. So...
4967211 No they didnt they busted Coffin escape. They proved you can stay alive underground for a while in an older episode but not escape. Apart from anything there isnt enough room in side a coffin to generate enough force to brake the lid.
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4967173 Dash in now... a superpredator.
4967224 yeah but dash is now something more then a pony, and is now insanly strong, plus she suffers fryiom hulk syndrom, wich man the madder dash gets, the stronger she gets... and FLUTTERSHY was in mortal peril.... that would throw anyone into Asuras Wrath levels of rage
4967190 or kick it hard enough theshock wqve knocks the dirt out of the way...
4967382 no I main what kind a transformation is this?!
what is dash turning into.?
4967447 exactly, she is becomeing the ultimate predator. Although she currently has featurs from several of the Special infected mainly the Witch and Hunter, with a bit of Spitter thrown in. And for the witch bit, I ran the math, unless the witches claws have micrometer edges, she would have to be stronger tjen the Tank, as in realism mode, she insta-kills you, ipling SHE CUT YOU IN HALF
this is very interesting. while it's not the best story i've ever read, it's surprisingly well done. the only real complaint that i have is that it didn't have enough descriptions, and that it all seems to move pretty fast. if i had had a say in it, i would have had a prequel chapter that did a quick run through of the major events leading from Dash's death, to the funeral, and then a third person view of her body violently changing while she slept beneath the earth. and as for the descriptions, i would have done more for what she looked like when she burst from her grave. we got a basic idea, but i felt it could have been better.
but despite all that, it was still interesting.
4968457 I will take that advice into consideration, my good fellow.
Holy shit that's good!!!!
MOAR
4968457 fixed, plus bonus sceance
better. still has a lot of room for improvement, but i can easily see the changes. have you, by chance, considered getting an editor to help create and smooth out the story?
4982695 is that an offer?
4982803 unfortunately, i will have to say that that was not an offer. my job, home life, and school work have kept me from keeping up on such things in the past, and they've only gotten more cumbersome as these last few months have come around.
however, if you really want me to, i would try to see how it all worked out. if you want me to try, i shall send you my email, and you can send me these two chapters for me to attempt to work on.
hey there! hows things going on this story?
5316729 very slow, IRL keeps interfering because i need to find a job...
5316753 yeah, i know the feeling.... anyways, i was just checking in. making sure this story wasn't going to be dropped or nothing.
4966669 What are you talking about?
Why is this on hiatus and how long will it last?