Anon made a major impact on the lives of every friend he made in his time in Equestria, but he had to return home sometime. However, his friends weren't ready for him to leave just yet. Writing letters is supposed to be therapeutic...
I read through the previous journal entries and thought they were brilliant. The follow up is even better.
Always a treat to see a Trixie during her more vulnerable moments. The parts with her assistant were certainly sad and I felt for her. However, it's nice to see that friends can appear when you least expect it.
I find stories that paint Trixie as an inspiration to others very compelling. If she were to realize the charisma she has on others (Snips and Snails come to mind), she'd be making a name for herself like no other. The mane six of Ponyville might have the adoration of the town but, it's only one town. Trixie is known everywhere!
Really looking forward to the encounters at Ponyville. She's not coming back as a broken shell of her former self, but a confident performer. Things are looking interesting.
That was most enjoyable, I'm glad that her friends tracked her down in the end. There aren't many stories that delve this far into Trixie's psyche, it's refreshing to see a history and a deeper personality rather than the more common stuck up for the sake of being stuck up. I look forwards for the next installments, hopefully Limelight may get her comeuppance for her underhoofed behaviour towards the Great and Generous Trixie!
Oh geez, I like to listen to winamp while I catch up on reading here and Trixie's cover of Time to Pretend (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RtYNFjXZAIg) started playing just a little bit before the entry from Limelight showed up in the diary.
Great story, i don't tend to like characters like Trixie at all, but the way you have portrayed her, really deep without losing her show-off egocentric attitude was great! Keep it up
Brilliant. I love this idea!
I read through the previous journal entries and thought they were brilliant. The follow up is even better.
Always a treat to see a Trixie during her more vulnerable moments. The parts with her assistant were certainly sad and I felt for her. However, it's nice to see that friends can appear when you least expect it.
I find stories that paint Trixie as an inspiration to others very compelling. If she were to realize the charisma she has on others (Snips and Snails come to mind), she'd be making a name for herself like no other. The mane six of Ponyville might have the adoration of the town but, it's only one town. Trixie is known everywhere!
Really looking forward to the encounters at Ponyville. She's not coming back as a broken shell of her former self, but a confident performer. Things are looking interesting.
Till then!
Was that Lucky Swirl? Aww, shame on Trixie for forgetting the first friend she made on her journey. Guess travelling does that to a pony.
That was most enjoyable, I'm glad that her friends tracked her down in the end. There aren't many stories that delve this far into Trixie's psyche, it's refreshing to see a history and a deeper personality rather than the more common stuck up for the sake of being stuck up.
I look forwards for the next installments, hopefully Limelight may get her comeuppance for her underhoofed behaviour towards the Great and Generous Trixie!
Oh geez, I like to listen to winamp while I catch up on reading here and Trixie's cover of Time to Pretend (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RtYNFjXZAIg) started playing just a little bit before the entry from Limelight showed up in the diary.
i liked it ever so much, keep up the great writing
Great story, i don't tend to like characters like Trixie at all, but the way you have portrayed her, really deep without losing her show-off egocentric attitude was great! Keep it up
Lovely.
Simply lovely.
That is all I can say.
A-MAH-ZAH! I wish to see more please! I need to know how the trip to Ponyville went!
Since the author has been offline for 6 years, I suspect that it's no use posting typos to be corrected, so
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