Adoxography

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The night before her banishment, Luna talks to a guard about the importance of her life.

Cover art: "In the Moon" by e-Kate98 on DeviantArt

All characters are humanized.

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the dobermans

the dobermans #1 · Sep 15th, 2014 · · ·

Nice and complex. Added to Sad Luna.

Shumiry

Shumiry #2 · Sep 17th, 2014 · · ·

Why doesn't this have more views? This is awesome. Literally. I love the way you wrote this, the phrasing, pacing, everything about it is so hauntingly beautiful. Your prose is the kind that rolls through the reader's mind, gaining momentum as the story progresses. It's wonderful, and each scene comes alive from your descriptions. Very well done, and an excellent read.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

IsabellaAmoreSirenix

IsabellaAmoreSirenix #3 · Sep 17th, 2014 · 1 · ·

5013248 Thanks! I was surprised by how much time I spent on this, rewording certain scenes and making sure the overall message was clear. Honestly, I felt really unsure about whether I was fixing some past mistakes when it came to description and dialogue, so I'm very relieved to know I'm moving in a good direction.

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