Description, Prologue and Chapter 1 were all altered because they kinda sucked. Prior readers are not required to re-read the entire chapters.
A New World: A New Way short side story.
Captain Stu was a very young man who obtained and retained his title because of one particular trait: he never gets angry, frustrated, or flustered. He is calm and collected no matter the situation and always quick to a decision. This has served him well ever since taking over his father's Supply Vessal, but when Arceus decides to move nearly all Pokémon and 90% of human's over to Equuis; he finds that what works above the waves isn't so useful below them. It doesn't help that he's a ferocious looking Gyarados now. Whoever decided that must have a serious love of irony.
I had wondered when a water pokemon story would come out, All I knew was that it wouldn't be me that put it out there though.
You have a typo repeated a lot: You're Highness.
Please fix and repost. Thank you.
So Maretlantis is part of the story now sweet!
Welcome to Equss Mac!
Hellooooooooo. Just noticed one error in this chapter and I thought I should let you know.
I believe you meant to say "glance."
Noticed one other minor typo in this chapter:
Pretty sure that should be "cleaned" as she's describing a past event.
Alright, decent work so far. I was a bit uncertain about reading this one (mainly due to the main character's name being pretty much "Marty Stu"), but I was able to read this piece all the way through. Good work on that. Also, I can't help but wonder if the talking Slowking in Sapphire Shores' dressing room is the same Slowking that was featured in the second Pokemon movie.
4994253 Myself, I was turned off by the main character having command of a ship at the ridiculously tender age of seventeen years old. That pretty much did it for me.
4994253 The Mary Sue thing is intentional. I tend to do things like that.
You can't be serious.
5028937 I can because it amuses me.
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Aaaaaaaaaand that's why I'm guessing this story is in the non-canon folder of the "New World, New Way" group.
cancelled eh? Welp i guess i dident really know what to Think about this story anyway.
4994934 A lot of the protagonists of the games and mangas are even younger than that, you know....