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It Never Ends


"If I can't live what can I be?" "If I can speak, why can't I scream?" "If I can't die why can I bleed?"

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The River lies deep within the forest where most ponies believe there's nothing about it worth checking out but that's not true. Three ponies knew of it's true capabilities but two of them have disappeared and while everypony has no idea of what happened to them but the last pony of the three, known as Raza must now go through The River and see what became of them with the help of a pony determined to find her sister. On his journey he will discover certain dark secrets of himself. Because for those who go into The River a dark and disturbing fate will await for them.

This story is a fan sequel/story of it's own piece. (Its not an official sequel!) That was inspire by one of my favorite fics Sleestack's One-Shot The River. go check it out it's an awesome dark story that deserves more views. Also I think you should read the original to understand this story better. Also if you can understand the symbolism of the picture than I owe you a high-five.

Teen for blood

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

Wow. I can't wait to see where this goes. Good job!

5094202 Glade you liked it and thanks for the fav.

Great! You called Bon Bon "Bin Bon" at one point, but still pretty good. I have a feeling that now Colgate and Raza will explore human world, looking for Lyra and Bon Bon, which I look forward to.

5304694 There will be some exploring. I guaranteed that.

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