but without the cartoonish body proportions

sorry that's a deal-breaker

loving this so far!

*finishes reading*

Well there goes my hope that she was a sub for a secret bondage fetish cult and that the others would end up taking turns to do what they will with her.

Don't get me wrong, enjoying what's here so far but give me a second to get over the disappointment...

...

(Pssst, if anyone wants to steal that idea, gopher it!)

There better be hot Twilestia action.

off to good start!

This looks good so far.

Now I'm hoping for some Twilestia action. As well as Twilight/Everyone! Well, the girls, not everyone.

I'll be watching this.

Well then...

Cool story so far, I'd love to read more!

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Aw, why not let the boys have some fun, too?

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That Flash Sentry tag miiight be there for a reason.

but without the cartoonish body proportions.

you can remove this and let others decide on what proportions the girls actually have for themselves.

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I probably could. But I felt I would get more complaints about describing the characters with proportions that don't match the movie's character models.

4992812 Well, she does have all the required female equipment as well...

4992833 Eh hay we don't have to see what the author sees, when I think humanized Pinkie I think the one from the movie with regular sized boobs. not the milf jugs we Americans have all over the place.

A futa-Twi fic? Well... I deeply approv- Hold up... is that a Flash Sentry icon, dood?

I will stay positive for the sake of reading some good futa-Twi on everyone, dood.

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Upon further reflection, I think you're right.

Good advice, thanks.

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Now, what kind of writer would I be if I didn't cater to the FlashLight crowd?

(With extra dicks. )

4994212 A confused writer, dood. Well... here's to Flash Sentry getting pegged, dood.

I enjoy this.

nailed it ~hellsing abridged

It is 10/10