Not bad. The only thing I didn't like about it (so far) is something that you intended to do anyway: make the CMC sound like their MAS selves rather than canon selves; but I don't dislike that enough to give me a negative opinion overall. I'll be keeping track of this one.
5256604 Is there such a thing as non-violent disembowelment?
5256934 Well that was the whole point I'm glad you liked it anyway though.
5258003 5258135 Thanks for the typo finding. Glad you were satisfied.
5258462 5258542 Yeah if you watch the series in order it actually explains where the demon came from and why it is obsessed with Twilight. I can imagine those things would be pretty weird to people who haven't watched it. And yes, butts deserve the occasional lick too.
5258476 Want to clue us in to what exactly was so shocking about it? I'm curious.
5258729 Regardless, the exchange between Apple Bloom and Thrackerzod about how they're not going to kill Twilight was funny. I like that I'm not the only person who's into rimming.
Comment posted by Scootaloo22 deleted Nov 12th, 2014
5258729 i cant stop doing their voices, and thats part of it. the other part is i know the mentally advanced series so well i dont really want to see what happens when scootaloo gets what she's been known to want in the series. but i want to read it still, dammit. i cant decide, but when i do, i'll do so on my own decision.
5258747 How very enlightened 5258772 Got me there. 5259048 Sort of. It has fewer people working on it so it's not as polished, but I enjoy the humor more than other (at least after the first few episodes). The same characters are also used in Rainbow Dash Presents, which all generally happen around the time of episode 10-12. 5259239 Yes Thrackerzod may occasionally come up with a plan to kill Twilight Sparkle, but they will all be really bad plans. 5259793 We really do. 5260410 Try having them all speak in Morgan Freeman's voice. It probably won't help, but it will be hilarious.
Not bad. The only thing I didn't like about it (so far) is something that you intended to do anyway: make the CMC sound like their MAS selves rather than canon selves; but I don't dislike that enough to give me a negative opinion overall.
I'll be keeping track of this one.
That was satisfying.
'nother typo
i read into the first chapter about 200-300 words in, and couldnt read any more. i just couldnt. . . i want to but i cant.
Butt licking? Oh, yeah, this definitely deserves a fave!
5256604 Is there such a thing as non-violent disembowelment?
5256934 Well that was the whole point I'm glad you liked it anyway though.
5258003
5258135 Thanks for the typo finding. Glad you were satisfied.
5258462
5258542 Yeah if you watch the series in order it actually explains where the demon came from and why it is obsessed with Twilight. I can imagine those things would be pretty weird to people who haven't watched it. And yes, butts deserve the occasional lick too.
5258476 Want to clue us in to what exactly was so shocking about it? I'm curious.
Regardless of my opinion of the comments of this fic. I have balanced all of their votes.
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5258729 'non violent disemboweling' - sure - disemboweling - taking the bowels outside the body cavity -is quite common in some surgeries.
well , that video was entertaining , so it's like friendship is witchcraft with less editing and a different comedy take?......
5258729 Regardless, the exchange between Apple Bloom and Thrackerzod about how they're not going to kill Twilight was funny. I like that I'm not the only person who's into rimming.
This fanfic is quite hot, need more abridged series turned to fanfic form
5258729 i cant stop doing their voices, and thats part of it. the other part is i know the mentally advanced series so well i dont really want to see what happens when scootaloo gets what she's been known to want in the series. but i want to read it still, dammit. i cant decide, but when i do, i'll do so on my own decision.
5258747 How very enlightened
5258772 Got me there.
5259048 Sort of. It has fewer people working on it so it's not as polished, but I enjoy the humor more than other (at least after the first few episodes). The same characters are also used in Rainbow Dash Presents, which all generally happen around the time of episode 10-12.
5259239 Yes Thrackerzod may occasionally come up with a plan to kill Twilight Sparkle, but they will all be really bad plans.
5259793 We really do.
5260410 Try having them all speak in Morgan Freeman's voice. It probably won't help, but it will be hilarious.
5261502 LOL Yeah, probably. How exactly is tying her to the bed going to kill her? That is, unless you take the route of using a pendulum.
5262063 I haven't, no. I'm a big fan of their work but are too shy to message them saying "Hay look at this clop fic!"