A thousand years ago Discord was turned into stone, what happens if he was in love with a female named Posey. Now Discord is out of his stone prison, what will happened when he sees Fluttershy.
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I cri evertim.
I cannot wait to see how he reacts to flutters!!!!
4941786 English is my first language. I was born in America, and I still live in America. I guess the reason why you say that is probably because of my grammar or spelling. I am not trying to be rude. Believe me that is not me at all, I do not like making ponies upset or hurt. The reason why of my spelling and grammar is a bit off because of the fact that I wear hearing aids. It's hard for my to sound out the words. They way I hear things is a bit different then a normal hearing person. For example 'S' will sound like 'F'.
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I'm sorry, but I don't understand how that affects your writing. I have a friend who is deaf -- she only speaks in sign language -- and she writes just fine.
4943697 Ponies/People just have different ways to do it. Some ponies/people can work well with it some ponies/people can't. With me it's a bit of a struggle. I didn't get my hearing aids until I was 5. So that's 5 years of my life without hearing. So I didn't understand the way words are sound. Also do to the fact I can't read lips, and I bet your friend can.(I am not trying to be mean to you friend. I was just saying.)
Oh boy. This is going to be GOOD! One thing I must say is that Fluttershy is way to calm in this. You would expect more of a " OMG! A DRAGON IS IN MY HOUSE!!! HELP!!!"
4998612 Discord is human. So his is not a dragon. Also the song that Fluttershy and Discord where singing.... Actually no spoilers. I'll put in the next chapter.
4998649 Oh well then, aren't I forgetfull! I completely take that back! Great st-... wait, do you hear that?
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Shiver me timbers!!! A angst storm is acoming! This is what happens when ye be immortal! Be prepared for the feels, ya landlovers!
Great job! I love this book! I noticed a little error, though.
"I think I know where Discord is?"
There isn't supposed to be a question mark. I'm sorry, but that bugged me a little.
5002174 ok thanks. I'll change it right now.
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I'm sorry if I seemed rude! I have OCD! Will you forgive me?
5002227 It's ok
Everypony makes mistakes in their writing. I am glad you pointed it out. And I am happy that you like my story so far. 
Hmm... I would think Posey would be Fluttershy's great grandmother. It HAS been 1000 years.
5002589 I think pony live longer then humans.
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Your welcome, and thanks for understanding!
5003224 Your welcome
Um are u going to be done soon with the next chapter
5047695 I have school now, so my chapters will be a little delay, but I'll try to get the next chapter as soon as possible.
5049754 Thx
5051782 your welcome. and please don't be sad. I think i'll have the chapter done this week.
By what day exactly do you think it'll be done?
5061929 I should be done by today or tomorrow.
Hmm...
Ill favorite the story because I love the idea...
There are a lot of odd parts in the story that do not match up.
Discord was trapped for 1000 years...How is Fluttershy the daughter of Posey?
What is the average lifespan of a pony that makes that possible?
How is Discord not completely beside himself with rage at what's happened to him?
After realizing they made a mistake would not Celestia and Luna try to fix this tragedy instead of just continuing to call him evil?
I understand that these details may be answered in your head canon, but they did not make it to the story it seems like.
This brings up pacing.
The story is happening way too quickly
If you take the time to explain the details of your story it will bring the pacing back down to a manageable level while allowing you to take your readers on a tour of your vision of Equestria.
As it stands you have a fantastic idea, but it is getting lost in a confusing fast paced story with little to no details.
Do not get discouraged!
You have some great ideas, and with a little practice you will be able to write an epic tale that will have your readers begging for more!
5071053 Thanks you for the advice
I agree. You kind of rushed it a little but still. Good story
5071478 Thanks and I'll try to slowing my pacing.
It is like Phantom of the opera right now I love that movie!
Plz update this this is great so far
4998649 its from Phantom of the opera ppl so look it up!!
aww so adorable!!!
I FUCKING LOVE PHANTOM OF THE OPERA
right now im guessing I was the only one that sung the whole part where flutters and rainbow were talking to the music of angel of music
AND THEN YOU PULL THE MUSIC OF THE NIGHT AS THE LULLABY
I WILL LOVE YOU IF YOU INCORPERATE ALL I ASK OF YOU INTO THIS
wait wait wait, WHAT?!?!?! You said discord was frozen a thousand years ago. yet posey managed to live long enough to give birth to fluttershy in that day and age? I don't get it. I think yo have a continuity error.
instead, it would make more sense if posey was a ancestor of flutters or something like that. beside that, this is a very good story!
Dun Dun DUN!
This is sad, but I love it. And yay Phantom of the Opera!!!! I love that movie so much! I am going to see how Discord reacts to fluttershy now.
Discord was trapped in stone for thousand years. Wouldn't Posey be Fluttershy's ancestor? I find it hard to believe that Posey would live that long to give birth to Flutterdhy in this day and age.
This won't end well...
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope your mom's ok
6367104 maybe she was sent from discords time to the after nightmare moon time
On no what will happen next
please update soon
please add more chapters
Calling it now, Discord's her father.
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I agree.
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can you please fix the timing with the thousand year thing fluttershy would be realistically poseys,great great great great great granddaughter, I mean no offence but its been bugging me , love the story though <3
Uh...just how old was Posey? I mean...1000 YEARS? And she only died 15 YEARS AGO?! That doesn't make sense! I'd believe if Posey was a family name.
Also, your dialogue should be written in the same line as when you dictate who says it.
"For instance, it should look like this," I said.
"Find" should be "fine" in numerous places.
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7282732 Maybe ponies are long lived.
7282732 We all know Granny smith has lived longer than 100 years. Maybe Posey has lived longer