Each of the Mane Six have rough days, and this just happens to be one of them. Which is why Twilight decides for all of them to have a Sleepover!
But things get crazy as each of the Elements of Harmony think they have a tougher job then the other. When the argument gets to rough, fate decides to jump in and help. How? By swapping their minds! Will the Mane Six find a way to change back? And will they survive doing what they thought would just be statements?
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>Featured on 6/23/2015
Chapters (4)
I like the idea of this story. And a few things:
Extra period.
Felling should be feeling.
I feel like the 'only 100 more' part is a fragment. Maybe a semi colon instead of a period between 'left and only?'
Animals should be animal.
I think this is a great start. You got an upvote and fav from me.
Actually, this chapter looks fine. Good pace and transition between scenes. The premise can lead to an interesting and fun adventure. Keep up the good work.
Interesting enough concept will keep an eye on this.
Just a note though you don't have to capitalise some of the words you do, for example
pink earth pony don't need capitals, there we a few others as well but overall its just a small thing and not even that bad
Well only thing i found off was the remark AJ made, cause we have seen applebloom applebucking, was in SSCS 6000
I only made AJ say that because, even though she's my favorite filly, Applebloom's only bucked once in the entire series, which I find kind of sad.
You have a story that's going to be about the mane six switching bodies, and it's not going to be called "Out of my Element".
I'm heart broken.
Unfortuantely there's already a piece of work called that on this site; so I guess it's not your fault.
Sorry
I already had this story on my mind before I made my profile...I'll check out Out of My Element though!
I don't think I've read a Freaky Friday fic. Now I am.
Ladies, you don't have to engage in a dick measuring contest to see who had the worst day. Just get shitfaced with some Sweet Apple Cider and laugh off the day with your true true friends.
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If everything was that easy we'd all be drunk everyday and in every fimfiction story.
You're fine, it's hard writing a story.
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I'm happy you support my work!
Well, it was a decent length at least, and didn't drag on or anything, but it seems odd you'd be wondering if we're disappointed or not when you haven't even got past the introduction. It's like "Hi my name is oh darn I hope I didn't offend you"
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I'm also kinda shy in reality.
It's probably because this story seems to be getting kind of popular, and I don't want something to happen that ruins all that.
This is really fun so far. I'm interested to see where this goes. :)
surrounded.
wasn't.
DT and SS better start running
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. And also thank you for adding my story! You're so helpful to making this story popular.
I promise you, that prank will come back to haunt Pinkie in the story later
Narrowing. Also, DT, start running.
Yep, you all work hard.
WasN'T flying.
Captain, our sensors detect impending shenanigans.
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Oh, thnx for helping me out on what I missed. I'll keep an eye out for mistakes like that in later chapters.
Heh heh, nothing else to say
2 pages in and 5 typos. Please edit. Spellcheck alone does NO suffice!
Your day, or yer since you're writing her accent.
JusT taking this.
That.
It was an alright chapter. Could use some work still. But get to the brain craziness already!
This looks interesting, can't wait for more.
Hey this guy's alive.... neat.
It's ALIIIIIIIIVE!
This is definitely going to be interesting.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
This is HILARIOUS.
Tracking...
piece /price of paper......
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Gal actually, but nevertheless, I am back in the world of living and posting!
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That dialouge was hilarious! I love the drawing, does it reflect your confusion and did you do it on your own? To be truthful I can't draw to save my life.
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Thanks to everyone else who has gladly commented! I really appreciate it!
6408864 Ah. Sorry ma'am.
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It's perfectly fine.
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6408864 Pinkie wouldn't be breaking her pinkie promise about his crush and she could have some fun too!
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It's nice but the hunger for more is there.
RD would propably make a better Pinkamenum Darki than Pincus Casualus.
Can't wait for Applejack having a way with Fluttershy's wings - that has to be cool!
Two things. First, sweet! He lives!
Second, abdominally? Methinks you have an error there. Then again, I'm 3/4 asleep. Don't mind me.
Yay it's starting to get interesting! So Fluttershy is Twilight, boy is that going to be a trick. I'm not sure what's freaking Rainbow Dash out, the fact that she's grounded or the fact that she has to act like Pinkie Pie. It's a good thing everyone is so sensible and realize maturely that doing each other's jobs wouldn't show them which is harder, since they don't have any skills at that job. NAHH how hard could baking be?
...if this parallels the episode with Trenderhoof, I am going to laugh so hard.
scrapped => scraped
keep her energy. => conserve her energy.
screeched madly => screeching madly
he rown => her own
followrd => followed
It's only a day o-" => It's only a day o- me say daaay-o daylight come an me wan go home
as she snaps were heard. => as the snips were heard.
This is really interesting! You did a pretty good job so far ^_^
Though I feel it was a bit out of character for them having the fight go THAT far. Also, I feel like their top priority would be trying to solve the issue and not quickly jumping to 'spending a day in each other's hooves'.
Waiting for Pinkie to destroy the universe with Rarity's magic, somehow--
Will this ever get continued?